Original - Hot Chocolate Drabbles

[eltea]

Title: Best Served Cold
Universe: Menagerie
Prompt: “frosty”, from pulped_fictions
Wordcount: 346
Genre: Humor
Rating/Warnings: K+
Summary: In which Will makes a dangerous misjudgment.
Author’s Notes: A silly vignette from Menagerie; meet Will. :) (Also, I know tierfal has used one of the jokes before, so she gets subconscious-inspiration credit for that line. XD)

Comments

[alias_amy]

I am so intrigued now! This scene hints at a real depth in the relationships among the players, as well as working very well as a scene in itself. Loved the line "capable of inflicting messy death." And all the physical action in the piece is well delivered.

[tierfal]

I totes don't remember what joke is mine, so you are more than welcome to keep it *foeva*. XD

ALSO BRB LITERALLY SNORTING AT WORK

/how much do I ship this oh wait you already know

[sabriel75]

Everyone here feels real, but Toni especially comes across vivid and his interaction with the others reveal their personality on a deeper level. Their carefree-ness in the snow until he comes along.

As always your pacing, quick and fluid, is impressive.

[etiam_quietus]

Ooooh, snow golem FTW! Ha, I wasn't expecting that, but I love the tension of the piece and the action - it's got a lot of excitement throughout the piece.

[tierfal]

AAAAAAAAAAH I hope you somehow tie snowed-on palm trees into this same bit, because the suspense is slightly cruel. :D

I love this drabble, though; the completeness of the scene - the situation, Will's character, the weather, all of it - is so profound in so few words. ajfkdklsj *fangirl*