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[duanya_lesfics]

Title: Shallow, part 4/12
Characters: Albus Severus Potter/Scorpius Malfoy, James Potter II, Lily Potter II, Harry and Ginny Potter
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: Slash, language, and thematic elements (eating disorder).
Word Count: 3,945
Summary: "The only difference between the two instances, though, is simply that Scorpius is too sick at heart to eat,

Comments

[house_illrepute]

i just read all four parts and i must say -- wow. great story-arc. looking forward to how you resolve this. :kudos:

[amor_remanet]

Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it! ♥♥

[amor_remanet]

Thank you! ♥♥ I really felt like James needed to be humanized after the first and second chapters; he got the short end of the stick, in terms of characterization, and that needed to be fixed.

[aurieal]

Why must you kill me right when I get up in the morning? D:

Another amazing, heart-wrenching part, as usual. THERE ARE REAL TEARS AGAIN!

[amor_remanet]

I didn't mean to, sweetie! ♥♥ ...Okay, I did a little. But only a little.

I love you. ♥♥

[aurieal]

Ilu! ♥♥♥♥♥

[amor_remanet]

Ilu more! ♥♥♥♥♥♥

[abusing_sarcasm]

I just read this from the beginning, and I was seriously moved. I think you've handled a serious topic in an amazing way. I can't wait to see where this goes!

[amor_remanet]

Thank you very much! ♥♥♥

[rette_mich_th]

James' reaction was perfect. I can't wait to see how he hadles the situation.