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dtwilight

Part of the Team

Aug 13, 2009 05:21

Title: A Part of the Team
Author: Twilight
Summary: Missing scene for Spare Parts. Nineteenth story in my summer writing series
Feedback: Always welcome

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the sentinel fic, missing scene from spare parts, summer writing project

Comments 8

FB: Part of the Team arameth2001 August 13 2009, 23:00:20 UTC

A lovely reflection on place, Naomi motherhood and acceptance. An excellent piece of writing as usual.

Re: FB: Part of the Team dtwilight August 14 2009, 20:47:43 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

stoneygirl77 August 14 2009, 06:24:10 UTC

Just a fantastic take on the Spare Parts ending. I love it. It's so plausible and I love that it is from Naomi's point of view. Another great story.

dtwilight August 14 2009, 20:48:08 UTC

So glad you liked it and thanks for taking the time to let me know.

romanse1 August 16 2009, 21:17:28 UTC

Oh that was nostalgically beautiful! That's Naomi at her very best - when she's admiring Blair for the man he is AND sharing a friendship with Jim just for Jim. You did a wonderful job of writing a story for the episode!

dtwilight August 17 2009, 02:02:19 UTC

Thanks you very kindly...now I'm of to read your MFU fic...can 't wait :)

marizilda September 12 2009, 01:18:21 UTC

Parabéns!

I loooooooooooved : )
Very good!

Hugs

Mari : )

dtwilight September 12 2009, 04:10:43 UTC

Thanks Mari. So glad ya liked it.