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An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 21.2 (21 of 35)

Jul 20, 2013 10:08

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 21.2 (21 of 35)
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- As always, eternal thanks.
Rating: PG- lots of plottiness here
Word Count: 5,424
Summary: A case of mistaken identity may actually benefit our intrepid DI.
NOTE: I've decided to change the way I ( Read more... )

an officer and the noble woman, crossover, whosintheattic, fanfic, peter carlisle, donna noble, doctor who, blackpool

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dtstrainers July 21 2013, 19:03:05 UTC

I'm glad you liked it. I spent much of last night plundering your fic on FF, greedily devouring it and not commenting nearly enough. Gorgeous stuff, especially Next Stop Wonderland and Bad Trip. Thanks for taking the time to read what I've done so far.

sykira July 21 2013, 18:13:15 UTC

Ooooh the intrigue! Brilliant brilliant chapters ♥ It's lovely to see Carlisle letting Ian in and having some help, the UNIT bit was handled nicely--could have gone pear-shaped but for the resemblance :) well played!

And the previous part was LOVELY, with the storm and Shakespeare and then that add on *woah* I really did melt all over my keyboard!! Ah DT...

I love how slowly slowly he is chipping away at Donna's lack of self-esteem, her concerns are so very Donna but he handles her so beautifully, I love this love story!

dtstrainers July 22 2013, 03:03:55 UTC

Peter certainly got more than he bargained for with Ian's help, and I'm glad you liked the part with UNIT. As for the Shakespeare, I downloaded those on my phone to listen to on the way to work and got more than I bargained for. After a week of listening to it, I can almost recite it from memory, but in a Scottish accent, which wasn't my intent. I like DTs rendition far better than my own.

Glad you liked and and thank you for the continued support.

dm12 July 29 2013, 20:02:32 UTC

So UNIT is thinking that maybe the Doctor has gone under cover as DI Carlisle? Is that a correct interpretation here? Oh, dear... are they in for a surprise. I guess they don't know about his regeneration. In any case, it sounds like they will not interfere with the investigation of Donna's background, then.

tkel_paris August 7 2013, 20:19:50 UTC

Ooh! I like this part! And the connections with Ten's actions after Donna are good. At least UNIT won't interfere. Yet... When Eleven sticks his nose in, I'm sure they'll have a different viewpoint. Oh... I thought that Sarah Jane might be around to talk, but she's probably dead. :(

Anyway. This was a nice break from the normal chain of events. I hope to see both of these two again, soon. :D

eloriekam August 27 2013, 17:55:18 UTC

Ah, Saturday 9 June brings back much fonder memories than the memorable May date. I watched some of my best friends get their Master's hoods that day, while freezing my bum (and other things) off in a 2.5 hour outdoor ceremony. I was a bit miserable, but it was great to see them all. Onto the story...

Oooh UNIT. Nice Torchwood reference with respect to the Weevils.

Huh. She's assuming he's undercover or fob-watched, probably without knowing what the latter is, but at least this means that the Doctor and UNIT won't be interfering at cross-purposes?