An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 16

[dtstrainers]

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 16
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Beta/Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- Special, special thanks.  You know why.
Rating: M for Mature. You were warned.
Word Count: 7,451
Summary: A typical night out at the George with Peter and Donna.
Disclaimer: Donna and Peter- oh, fudge- just

Comments

[tkel_paris]

Holy! What the hell are you up to now?! ;D

Seriously, they are getting naughty in public! A few stories about this and his reputation will be changing at the station! ;) Might be advisable for them to take those activities in more private settings.

Oh, I hope they do get to have that happy ending... The previous chapters have me nervous... although I'm right now more curious about what she's doing to him! ;DDDDDD

[dtstrainers]

Don't worry- our dynamic duo have learned their lesson and will be a bit more... subtle .... in future, if only in public. In their defense, if you look back, it was't their activities that actually got them into trouble, it was poor planning and public intoxication working against their better judgement. It's not as though either of them 'copped a feel', so to speak, for the whole pub to see. They'll be back to the George with no more than a few snickers and a raised glass or two to mark that the event ever occurred. And Peter was only playing when he suggested the loo for a future liaison; sort of ... mostly ... a bit

[sykira]

Wow, I just...I don't even know where to begin. This is seriously BRILLIANT. Jaw droppingly so. I want a bath Room like that...seriously...GUH. I think this is the first AU where Donna is with someone else and all I want is the Doctor to STAY THE HECK AWAY and let her have him! There is just so much to savor in this story, I've read it more than once now, exulting in the little details like how he held her hand and the railing walking down the stairs at the George to keep her from tripping. The characterization is spot on too - how he'd let himself go with a few beers but not actually be so drunk as to not be in control. And LOL at public display of affection - hee! Beautifully handled, so very satisfying to see Donna's community witness her finally get something good and something that she deserves ♥

And then mirror sex? holy schmoley woman, you are trying to kill me with this aren't you??! I don't want this story to EVER EVER end! Please just keep writing, I get all asquee when a new chapter shows up.

[dtstrainers]

I don't think I've ever been stunned into silence at a review, but you managed it. I am seriously flattered and humbled at your generosity. I adore the Doctor so much, but Peter Carlisle is my true love. I couldn't just do a drive-by relationship between Donna and Peter- they've both been hurt before and I think they'd be tentative in establishing any new relationships.

And you liked the mirror scene, huh? I'll pass that on to Whos- that was her idea... ;-)

I know this is all waaayy too long for a casual read, so I greatly appreciate you and anyone else who's stuck with this story thus far. I didn't intend or this to be so long, but we're just about at the halfway mark and I have been waiting months- literally months- to post the next two parts, as they were written before anything else.

Thanks again- this keeps me writing.

[dm12]

This is the halfway point? Wow

[dtstrainers]

This story was the strangest thing- WhosInTheAttic and I had been talking about it for awhile and it started out as something we were going to write together, but school and life got in her way, so I kinda hijacked the idea, with her blessings. If it hadn't been for her, I never would have written a word. (She's the genius behind the mirror idea

[eloriekam]

Ahh, the old 'who pays' issue. I've been on both ends (with other women) and on one end I stole the individual checks as they were set on the table and on the other a friend intercepted the check about 2 feet away from the table to circumvent the issue. But they'll not object to more of a tip for the night!

Wall sex coming up?! But Donna's got entirely good points... as does Peter, but Donna's points are a little more realistic.

I do hope Peter can help Donna be more confident of her beauty.

“That’s fine and dandy,” he replied. “I was plannin’ on followin’ ye, anyway.” Her horrified expression was enough to make him flop back on the bed and laugh until he cried.

OMG, I almost swallowed a nearly-whole grape at this. LOLOL!

A bath eh? And hmmmmm....!!!