An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 11 (11 of ?)

[dtstrainers]

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 11 (11 of ?)
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Beta/Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- I owe you a bit more than usual on this one.  And I'm still waiting on the Twins..  I miss them both.... Despite her involvement, I'm sad to say that any and all mistakes are my own.
Rating: M.

Comments

[tkel_paris]

(FYI: The links, are they working in this post? And there's no cut to hide the post on your friends page.)

Holy! *fans self* Oh, I loved that almost as much as Donna and Peter did. Gotta wonder how much longer it'll take before Peter HAS to have her around every night. ;)

Glad to see more. Hope your muse is cooperative this week.

[dtstrainers]

OH, FUDGE! Lesson learned!

No posting while:
One) tipsy,
B. No, two) in the tub,
Three or C) using an iPad, and,
Coming in a very low four, or D, or that little iv in brackets they use in footnotes) any combination of the above.

My deepest apologies and the above irritants have been corrected.

And I'm glad, really, really glad you liked it. Writing the naughty bits is always painfully difficult for me, and this one more than usual. As for my muse? The two of them have been chattering away in my head now to the point of distraction, which has been useful, given what's going on at work. Once I hit overload there, they start ping-ponging dialog around which- strangely- calms me down and keeps me going. I reckon I should be concerned when I start hearing voices, but when one of them belongs to Peter, I'm not going in for treatment.

[sykira]

GUHHHHH this was such an amazing ride, I love it! I love it all the more because he being so gentlemanly beforehand and so thoughtful about everything. LOVE!

[dtstrainers]

Oh, and you are an amazing person for continuing to read and comment!

I'm so glad you like it- I am more than a little embarrassed to write, much less post, chapters like this, and I'm never sure anyone else is going to read or like these parts of dubious content, but it just feels right in the story. I had more than a little help writing and tons of advice from my Co-Captain quite some time ago about this part, but I still stammer and blush when writing them. I love to read them, but actually writing them is just awkward and painful. Give me angst and uncertainty or playful banter any day.

Speaking of...I'm almost positive Sylvia and Wilf make their appearances next Friday, and Sylvia's in rare form. She's been ranting and raving in my head for the past week, so she's just getting wound up.

[sykira]

Wow, you could never tell this was hard for you to write cause it flows beautifully ♥ and it's REALLY REALLY hot!

[dm12]

I see what you mean about not suitable for those lacking a respiratory by-pass system! Those poor fruits, too.... the comment about no one carrying a banana in their pocket almost got Donna, good save, though.

My, my, I needed a fan for this one.

[dtstrainers]

You are too kind, and I'm glad you liked it and almost as happy that you took the time to comment on it. It's kind of sad- I know I should write for the sheer joy of it and to finish out the ever-expanding storyline- but every time someone comments, it makes me hunker down in the middle of the night and type away, bathed in the light of my laptop screen. There are worse ways to spend a night of insomnia than with Peter and Donna nattering away in my head.

I'm feeling a bit of angst and antagonism coming on, so enter the Dragon Lady this Friday...

[dm12]

Uh oh, the Dragon Lady.... she's going to lace it into Peter, but not for the reasons he thinks! Poor DI Carlisle has no idea what he's in for.

[whosintheattic]

Hot, hot, HOT. I loved being your cheerleader through this bit, and I'm happy to see it's gotten a warm reception. I think EVERYONE feels awkward about writing smut when they first start; you've filled in the imperfections since last I saw this, and it's great. Keep those chapters coming!

*innuendo intended*

[eloriekam]

Random trivia: this chapter is set on the same day as I took my oral candidacy examination. Based on the rating and the bits about the melon, I'm thinking this day will be a great deal more pleasurable for Peter and Donna than it was for me! ;)

Yes, mmm, eye crinkles. I love when those are mentioned!

Oooh and the arse... I like this chapter. :D

Oh, they are so sweet... sometimes very confident, sometimes very shy and uncertain... though I think a fair bit of the confidence is just having poise and presence of mind, and shy/uncertain is really them, inside.