An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 7

[dtstrainers]

Title: An Officer and the Noble Woman, Part 7 (7 of ?)
Author: dtstrainers
Paring: Donna Noble/Peter Carlisle
Beta/Co-Captain of this Ship: WhosInTheAttic- you complete me.  Any and all mistakes are my own.
Rating: All- just some plot and character development, fluffy and angsty all at once.
Word Count: 4,846
Summary: While investigating a murder, Peter

Comments

[tkel_paris]

Oh, I nearly squealed over the sight of a new chapter! :D

Ah, guess people's backstories, played by Policeman and Supertemp! I bet they'd wipe the floor with the Doctor's arse; that's a game that depends on the details. *giggles*

Oh, my... That's scary. No wonder Shaun freaked out. No wonder Sylvia and Wilf are going barmy. And my respect for Peter went up by a ton, demanding answers and trying to protect her. I think after this, he's going to have violent tendencies toward the Doctor. Why do I suddenly want him to punch Time Lord Idiotic unconscious and arrest him? ;)

Ooh... Eleven's still checking on her. He's in for a nasty shock. And I hope it's soon. He deserves a tongue-lashing and some good punches. Wonder who he's with, or if he's between companions. Wonder if River knows he's still checking on Donna, or even knows who she is to him yet.

Good luck with the next parts!

[saaammie]

I totally thought he was still Ten! Missed the bow tie part.

A lovely chapter, as usual. Was it just a pair of twins that they saw or something else?
Very interesting with the "higher up" phone call that the paramedics just happened to receive... Who might it be? ;)

[dtstrainers]

Nope- just a pair of twins, sparking the memory of her lost children. Sorry for the delay in response- this has been a wonderful week, but not for writing. I'll be posting part 8 later today. Thanks for continuing to read!

[whosintheattic]

I love this date so much!! Romantic, fun, and intimate. Shame it had to get spoiled...

[dtstrainers]

It's all part of the evil plan.... (insert diabolical laughter here.)

Thanks for the comments- it lets me know people are actually reading, which, in turn, compels me to abandon sleep entirely and write until dawn.

[eloriekam]

Interesting game!

Ooops, twins of twins. *winces*

'Bloke from higher up', eh? Not too many guesses as to who that is!

Yay, angsty snogging!

[toweringchewy]

good

[dtstrainers]

Thank you. This went from a tiny story to a behemoth on my hard drive and I'm still working on it. Thanks for the comments- it's nice to think that two years on, someone is still finding and enjoying this.

[helloprilly]

Giggling at tkels comment. Time lord idiotic indeed!! OMG that SO needs to become Donnas nickname for him.