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dsudis

Stargate Fic: Tell

Jul 10, 2009 10:40

Ummmm, I totally did not forget for a while I had written this, what, no.

This is a fixit of a fixit, or in other words a sequel to Common Language, a Bechdel Test fixit story I wrote about the kidnapped Air Force sergeant from "Children of the Gods." This will not make a whole lot of sense if you haven't read that ( Read more... )

bechdel test, sg-1, fic post

Comments 13

aurora_novarum July 10 2009, 16:19:40 UTC

Aw! I'm still haunted by "Common Language" (so of course this gave me an excuse to reread it), and I'm so glad you wrote closure for poor Stephanie.

I love the wonderful small insights you give to Sam and Daniel's characters here. How Sam feels connected to a fellow sister-in-arms and then thrown into a situation she wasn't prepared for, tries to remember what she's heard and do honor to the uniform for Jessie's sake.

And then Daniel and his whole mixed up complicated situation with Sha're (And she remembered!) and wow Sam wondered when Daniel had started trying to look as tough as the rest of them, and for God's sake why.

Aw! And wow.

dsudis July 12 2009, 22:34:37 UTC

Thank you! I really did feel like I needed to tie off those loose ends, and I'm glad this worked for you.

browngirl July 11 2009, 04:24:25 UTC

You deserve a commentbox full of praise for all the details I noticed you put in here, the beautiful and painful craft of this story, but I'm too busy crying.

dsudis July 12 2009, 22:36:44 UTC

*beams*

Thank you! I'm so glad this worked for you.

*shares Kleenex*

lokei July 11 2009, 18:49:49 UTC

This is a wonderful addition to your earlier story--and I'm so glad that Sha're remembered, and that Daniel understood to pass it on! Your Sam really stands out among the characterizations of Sam that I've seen as being extremely *human.*

dsudis July 12 2009, 22:37:29 UTC

Thank you! I was torn, because I wanted Stephanie to find out soon, and I wanted Sha're to remember, so I went with both, and I'm glad this worked for you!

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dsudis July 13 2009, 13:38:52 UTC

Yyyyyeah, if I had been watching Torchwood I might have decided it was not the week to post this. So. Sorry! And thanks! :)

sg_betty July 13 2009, 16:35:36 UTC

This is just wonderful--writing, characterization, the whole ball of wax. Just excellent!

dsudis July 13 2009, 20:39:23 UTC

Thank you!