It's a Kind of Magic Part Two by Aingeal (F/V, PG)

May 05, 2008 12:58

Title: It's a Kind of Magic Part Two
Author: Aingeal
Prompt: 32. Benton Fraser thought his life was simple, well ordered and logical until a chance encounter in the night with one Ray Vecchio throws his world into chaos and he finds things not even logic can explain.
Notes: Split into two parts due to LJ's posting limits. Huge thanks to leda_speaks for beta ( Read more... )

author: aingeal, rated: pg, length: 10000-15000, pairing: f/v

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nakeisha May 5 2008, 12:51:04 UTC
You already know how much I love this story - and I thoroughly enjoyed the re-read.

It's wonderful. It's so in character, it's a wonderful read and so utterly believable.

I love how you used other DS characters, not forgetting dear Dief, and the love Benny showed for Ray was so poignant and tangible - and vice versa.

I'm just so glad you liked the bunny I gave you enough to run with it and turn this superb story out - I really do think it is one of you top five stories, if not the top one. And it's duly saved in my Aingeal file.

I cannot praise it highly enough.

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aingeal8c May 5 2008, 13:43:08 UTC
I am glad you enjoyed the reread.

Thank you. :-) I had hoped it would be.

It was fun to fit in the other characters.

I'm glad you saew the love come through too.

I am so glad of your bunny gift, I really am. I do think it is one of the best ones I have written.

Thank you. That's lovely to hear. I'm so pleased.

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nakeisha May 5 2008, 15:34:17 UTC
Oh, I did.

YW - and it was.

And it really worked.

Oh, yes. So clear.

*Hugs you* And what's amazing really is for me to come up with such a lengthy and detailed bunny - I mean you know me and the 'P' word :-)

YW. Good.

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scotchsour May 5 2008, 18:48:18 UTC
Part Two - I love it, it was sweet and I still say you do dialogue wonderfully.

“Yeah, tied me up and left me for four days. If I hadn't figured out a counter spell I'd still be there,” Ray said.

“You do figure things out then,” Fraser said, trying to sound encouraging.

“Four days, Benny,” Ray reminded him.

Idiot me took a while to figure out the magic's language. :) Great story.

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aingeal8c May 9 2008, 10:23:58 UTC
Awww glad you liked it. Thank you I do like dialogue.

Hee hee well you got there in the end ;-)

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chase65 June 5 2008, 21:48:27 UTC
That was very sweet and kind of an awww, especially when Fraser volunteers to sacrifice his senses. It might be fun to see a story with the bookstore/magic shop and them working together come to life.

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aingeal8c June 6 2008, 08:27:50 UTC
Thank you. I was aiming for a bit sappy ;-) I was already planning some sort od sequel. I think it would be fun to see them working together.

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mulder200 November 28 2010, 20:26:33 UTC
Ah! That was a very sweet and romantic story.

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