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interruption challenge by mizface

Nov 11, 2009 14:47

Title: Scenes From an Italian Restaurant
Author: mizface
Fandom: due South
Pairing: F/K (implied)
Rating: G
Word Count: 940
A/N: Title from a Billy Joel song. And I did use the prompt, just in a blink and you’ll miss it kind of way

( Scenes From an Italian Restaurant )

interruptions challenge

Comments 49

love_jackianto November 11 2009, 20:33:36 UTC

'Stella smiles as she gets in. 'Okay.' And it is, she thinks, watching him through the window as the cab pulls away. Finally, it really is.'
I love that line. I really like fics where Stalla and Ray end on good terms.

mizface November 11 2009, 20:49:15 UTC

Thank you! I have come to really like Stella (behold the power of fanfic), so I like the idea that she and Ray could be friends again.

Thanks for reading!

china_shop November 11 2009, 20:36:29 UTC

Awwwwwww! That's really lovely, and I'm grinning like an idiot. So sweet to see them resolved and happy and friends. \o/!!!

mizface November 11 2009, 21:06:30 UTC

Thank you! *joins you in grinning* I love the idea that they could be friends again, and am glad I'm not the only one.

j_s_cavalcante November 11 2009, 21:01:03 UTC

Awwwwww!

I composed this in my head before I saw that someone else had phrased it exactly the same way. Because, Awwwww!

I love this.

I love this line especially:

He laughs at that, a clear, happy sound she hasn’t heard from him in a long time, and Stella remembers how easy it was to be in love with Ray Kowalski once upon a time.

Ray dancing with Stella on the sidewalk after the true confessions is just perfect. And he totally would come running if she needed help. He'd bring Fraser and the wolf, too. :)

♥ ♥ ♥

mizface November 11 2009, 21:09:26 UTC

JS!!!! *tacklehug*

Thank so much for reading, supercrazybusy artwoman.

And you picked my favorite line. *blows kisses*

I'm happy to hear the dancing worked. It's just so them, y'know? And yes, Ray would totally help, and make sure Fraser and Dief came along.

luzula November 11 2009, 21:52:03 UTC

Oh, I love the warmth between them here, that they've both moved on and can be easy with each other.

mizface November 12 2009, 00:11:05 UTC

Thank you! This made me very warm and happy to write - I'm glad it's showing through.

akite November 11 2009, 23:48:51 UTC

♥ I got a little teary eyed myself reading this.

mizface November 12 2009, 00:12:16 UTC

wow - thank you!