TEAM ROMANCE: backup fic, "At Last, of Course"

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Title: At Last, of Course
Team: Romance
Author: umbrella_half
Prompt: "You're crossing a line there"
Pairing(s): Fraser/Kowalski
Length: 1700 words
Rating: R for language
Author’s note: Thanks go to slidellra and also the_antichris for beta-ing tips (i.e. making the whole thing vaguely readable, thank you so much!) This was previously posted in the Team Romance community under the

Comments

[akamine_chan]

This was a wonderfully sweet story.

“Fraser.” Ray said, and took Fraser’s hand in his own. He had warm fingers. Dry palms. Rough knuckles. Ray’s thumb stroked across his wrist. “This what you’re sorry about?” He looked at Fraser, cocking an eyebrow.

I loved how a little touch took on such significance...good job!

[umbrella_half]

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I like big significance in little things =)

[bleedtoblue]

I enjoyed that very much! Thank you.

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Glad you enjoyed it :)

[randomisedhabit]

I like that you begin with the ending and only then proceed to tell the actual story.

Enjoyed it very much! :)

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Thanks very much!

[aftertherain]

This is so very lovely!

[umbrella_half]

Thank you :)

[mergatrude]

Awww! F/K kisses are the BEST! I loved the way you circled round.

[umbrella_half]

Kissing wins; hook, line and sinker! I'm glad you enojoyed it :)