Title: Failsafe
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spratTeam: Angst
Prompt: "That's the first thing you should do."
Pairing(s): F/K
Length: 5200 words
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None.
Summary: He stands there in the quiet street, in the shade from one of the neighborhood's big old oak trees, and he cleans the blood off his face and hands with his handkerchief and some water from
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"Understood."
"You are a freak, and you have shitty judgment, and so from now on, you are going to do whatever I say."
"Well, Ray. I have to admit that seems sensible."
"Good. I am glad we have managed to figure this out in a mature and responsible fashion."
"Indeed."
Oh, Ray, you wish! *squishes him*
The way you illustrated Fraser saying he trusts Ray while at the same time watching Ray put on the band-aid, double-checking it--that's briliant. Thank goodness Fraser's code of honor made him come around and admit his dishonesty. Heaven help them, getting in deeper.
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Thanks so much!
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so many things about this story pleased me, i don't even know where to start.
i love it when people explore how terrifying it must be to be the person who cares about BENTON FRASER, the man with a big red target on his back, who is stubborn as hell and has no sense of self-preservation. you really conveyed the panic of that experience perfectly. and the characterization on both of them was FANTASTIC. i absolutely loved the moment in the mirror with the band-aid.
and i'm with grey853, that last scene just about burned up my monitor with its sexiness.
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he tells Fraser be somebody different and Fraser says I can't
God, yeah. That's exactly it, isn't it? And I'm honestly not sure how this is going to end for them, because they're making some steps, but that issue isn't really going away anytime soon--as Ray says, it ain't all right. But still, that last scene, all that love and lust and frustration and confusion all tied up together... *shivers* Knockout combo. Awesome job.
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