Quadruped Challenge, by keerawa

Sep 15, 2007 11:20

Title: Proper Care and Feeding
Author: keerawa
Characters: RayK/Fraser, Turtle
Rating: PG-13
Length: 2918 words
Thanks to: My beta, slidellra
Disclaimer: Due South, Fraser, and Ray belong to Alliance/Atlantis.

Proper Care and Feeding )

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keerawa September 15 2007, 20:18:35 UTC
Thank you, secretlybronte, what lovely and detailed feedback! Ray really is something of an emotional acrobat. And I surprised you with the ending! Yay!

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keerawa September 15 2007, 20:19:10 UTC
*chuckles* He really is, isn't he? Thanks for the feedback!

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kill_claudio September 15 2007, 19:11:50 UTC
Oh, fantastic! That is just exactly like Fraser's twisted logic, to sublimate worrying about whether or not Ray would go with him by worrying about the turtle. I'm so glad Ray has more sense. *g*

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keerawa September 15 2007, 20:22:13 UTC
Thanks, kill_claudio! Fraser does tend to operate at a diagonal to everyone else's reality.

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simplystars September 15 2007, 19:25:54 UTC
Awww, I love this. Ray's voice is perfect, and Fraser is just the right degree of crazy and oblivious (because, Ray, isn't it obvious what he's doing? Hee.) and the ending makes me all warm and fuzzy and happy. ♥

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keerawa September 15 2007, 20:25:32 UTC
>because, Ray, isn't it obvious what he's doing?
*snickers* I's all terribly Fraserish. Thanks for letting me know you liked it, simplaystars!

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etcetera_cat September 15 2007, 19:53:12 UTC
Oh, Fraser! Being all subliminal about the turtle. <3

*showers you in glitter*

This was an utterly fantastic story!

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keerawa September 15 2007, 20:26:44 UTC
Glitter, yay! Thanks!

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