Five challenge by slidellra

[slidellra]

Five ways Ray Vecchio was disconcerted by Ray Kowalski.

For catwalksalone, for the prompt "disconcerting."
R, ~800 words, Ray/Ray.
zabira and isiscolo both came through with quick, thoughtful, critical, immensely helpful beta work. They rock.

Comments

[_medley_]

I. Adore. This. To little tiny pieces. Because Vecchio *sees* Kowalski, all that good-heartedness and bravery and tension, and isn't afraid to take it.

[slidellra]

Hooray! Thank you so much.

Vecchio *sees* Kowalski, all that good-heartedness and bravery and tension, and isn't afraid to take it.

*squishes them*

[viciouscats]

Awesome! Great ficlet.

[slidellra]

Thanks, hon! Glad you enjoyed.

[slidellra]

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*breaks face smiling* Thanks so much!

I'm so happy you liked those bits, the first because it breaks my heart and the second because it was fretted over and fiddled with and much improved with the help of good betas.

[spuffyduds]

Kowalski wasn't the only grown man to duck his head like a kid whenever anybody said something halfway nice to him Ohhhhhh. Sweet, and ow.

And--that random perps off the street tell Fraser stories. Yes, they would.

I love this. Sweet and full of all the details that you notice when you're falling, and doesn't make anyone the villain.

[slidellra]

Kowalski does woobie so very well. *pets him*

And they SO would. In the future, every two-bit crook in Chicago would claim to have been nabbed by or eluded the Mountie.

Yay! Thank you!

[akite]

♥, ♥, big RED construction paper ♥

[slidellra]

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