Amnesty: Genderfuck Challenge

[llassah]

Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Ray/Ray, allusions to existence of F/K/V
Length: 2650ish words
Notes: I blame

Comments

[lucifercircle]

Very hot. And you have Ray Kowalski's personality down perfectly. Seriously awesome.

[llassah]

Yay! Thank you very much. *wins at something*

[j_s_cavalcante]

You do win--that is HOT. Girl!Ray is recognizably Ray and oh, yeah, I can see why there'd be problems because Fraser won't hit Ray at all (we know why) and Vecchio won't hit a woman. I love the thoughts Vecchio has about how he (and Fraser) fell for the male Ray. Because he is all that. And he's just as hot in girl form.

This cracked me up:

...Kowalski nips my lower lip in warning, growling in between kisses, “Just fuck me already, Vecchio. If I wanted a fucking tea party, I’d have asked Turnbull.”

Hee! Also the last line was priceless!

[llassah]

Thank you! I was going to make it a casual, angry thing they had going, bt thought the f/k/v dynamic would be a really neat thing to try and figure out. And christ, I am so in love with girl!Kowalski, that bit just wrote itself *thanks the ptb for gorgeous Chicago detectives*

And glad you liked the tea party- Turnbull does invite girl! Ray for tea, and spends the time discussing underwear with her, and lets her have all the chocolate biscuits, then they both cry watching Little Women *g*

[j_s_cavalcante]

discussing underwear with her, and lets her have all the chocolate biscuits, then they both cry watching Little Women *g*

The chocolate cookies, okay. Turnbull would be gallant because he's so confused. Ray would eat them because he's a guy. He's not going to ask twice if someone wants to give him the cookies or say, "No, I couldn't!" But the underwear discussion and crying over LIttle Women? Noooooo! Not Ray! I don't buy that part.

[llassah]

Hehe, y'know, those mindrays you're sending are mighty powerful, you've got me thinking this is a serious fic idea too. Christ, when genfuck turns epic *g* And ok, no underwear or little women (What, Turnbull, they really short chicks or somethin'?)

[brooklinegirl]

god, this is deeply fucking hot. the desperation, the fighting, Kowalski with bruised knuckles already and all that fierceness and Vecchio knowing what to do with it. I LOVE this, so fucking much. The lead-up, the punching, the DETAILS, how Kowalski is smoking again, how he tastes, the curve of his hips, his ass, mmm, no panties. I just - SO damn hot, and the sex and the teasing, and OH, great fucking final line.

YAY.

[llassah]

Thank you! This one rather wrote itself, because the central image was one I just- well, ngrgh probably sums it up *g*. And there's something about him angry, the way he gets so mad he has to punch a wall to work it off that is a total button pusher. So I'm soo glad you liked, as you are all catalystish and everything! And commandosmokinggirl!RayK- how could I fail?

[slidellra]

Oh, I love your tough, angry, sexy girl!Ray. And, yeah, the banged up hand is somehow extra super smokin' hot.

[llassah]

Thank you! Cal handkink coming to the fore with the knuckles *g* God, have I told you how much I love that icon? *stares at it, distracted*

[debris_k]

*bows down in the presense of greatness*

*also feeds the pregnant!girl!Kowalski bunnies large ammounts of crack-enducing inspirational food*

Author! Author! No, wait, I mean More! More! ^.^

[llassah]

Oh dear, knocked-up-girl!kowalski? You know, I've been comforting myself with that border for a while now *g*. Thank you very much, I'm glad you like! Chocolate inspires...*thinks about chocolate for a loooong while*