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Dreams Challenge, by Capella: Untouched

Jun 27, 2006 21:58

Title: Untouched
Author: Capella
Rating: G
Words: 516
Notes: RayV/Stella, angst. Because after writing Wrong for out_of_con_txt I couldn't stop thinking about how RayV got there.

( Untouched )

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capella_fic June 29 2006, 20:08:36 UTC

Thank you. I hope they were good thoughts.

elementalv June 27 2006, 21:32:37 UTC

It’ll be one more thing to take with him when he leaves.

Ouch, ouch and damn that hurt. Lovely and painful.

capella_fic June 29 2006, 20:10:14 UTC

Thank you!

Lovely and painful.

I'm glad you thought so. Any way Ray leaves Stella has got to be painful, really. I just can't go along with the consensus that she kicked him out.

china_shop June 28 2006, 07:30:14 UTC

Oh, this is gorgeous! ♥

capella_fic June 29 2006, 20:10:57 UTC

Thanks!

xenocrate July 1 2006, 12:26:14 UTC

I love your word usage and imagery in this - so crisp and clean. Just right.

Looking at it as a prelude for your out_of_con_txt fic just makes that situation look even more disastrous, though...

Immediately after reading this I thought, "well, that makes sense, Ray is going for Kowalski because he can cope with damage and has the relief of thinking that it won't make too much of a difference there."

Then I kicked myself and thought, "actually, thing is, Kowalski's a guy, so Ray wouldn't think he needed protection, not in that way."

What with Vecchio, Kowalski and Stella all being in a bad way, I'm kind of worried what's going on with Fraser in the world of these fics!

capella_fic July 1 2006, 22:52:07 UTC

Just right.

Thank you! Crisp & clean is what I aim for, generally, as I lack the imagination and skill for more complex imagery. If it worked here, I'm glad.

I'm kind of worried what's going on with Fraser in the world of these fics!

Funnily enough, I'm part way through a follow-up to Wrong that does touch on that, just a little. I can't believe I'm abandoning all my other writing (and extremely pressing RL) projects to write Ray/Ray! What is happening here?

And I think your analysis of why Ray V feels he can go for Ray K is right on both counts to a certain extent, but there's a lot more to it as well. Which will probably come out in a fic at some stage. If I'm not careful this could end up being an epic. *Bangs head on desk*