Badfic Challenge by Mousewrites

[mousewrites]

Title: Hello mudder, hello fater
Wordcount: 852
Prompt:Camp's only been in session for a week and it's already turned into the long summer ever, for the newest senior counselor at Camp Windy Lake, Ray Kowalski. His girlfriend, Stella, who dragged him into this gig in the first place, has told him that she thinks they ought to see other people. The

Comments

[shayheyred]

Oh, ye gods, summer camp is so miserable anyway, and your depiction of Ray's summer is just....painful. Which is to say, great job.

[isiscolo]

Frannie! I was giggling like mad. Poor Ray.

[lynnmonster]

That gets a big, giant "AWWWW" from me!

[j_s_cavalcante]

As yucky as chewing on Styrofoam! Really wonderfully bad. Great characterizations, too! Vecchio's sartorial sensibilities...survive. :) Hee!

[buddleia]

I would so read more of this.