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Badfic challenge by kinetikatrue

Apr 18, 2006 03:35

Title: Dressed to Kill or Something ( Read more... )

badfic challenge

Comments 12

ulthyrja April 18 2006, 10:04:35 UTC

OMG, you've got like a straight link to Ray's head. It's like spooky!!!!

kinetikatrue April 19 2006, 00:43:10 UTC

OMG, it totally is! He's, like, haunting me and stuff!

(Also, y'know, thanks and all. I'd call this parodic RayK voice, personally, but it was definitely fun to write.)

china_shop April 18 2006, 11:11:48 UTC

Which was when Vecchio pulled out his magical mystery sewing kit and set to work - making a cut here and sewing these other two pieces together there and just generally snipping and stitching merrily away, bitching under his breath about the conditions he had to work under, yadda, yadda, until presto chango! I was standing there in this belted-robe-thing with fucking ridiculously wide sleeves and Frase, who seemed to have vanished while Vecchio was doing his thing, was offering me a pair of boxers made from a pillowcase.

*DIES!*

This rocks! I love that it takes FOUR PARAGRAPHS for Fraser to answer the goddamned phone, and an equal length of time for him to notice that they're OMG naked! *hearts like crazy*

kinetikatrue April 19 2006, 00:36:40 UTC

*wins, like, totally*

But, y'know, it's totally all on Ray, 'cos he just kept going off on these hyper little ranty tangents and refusing to just shut up and move things along. Not that I'm complaining, mind, but I didn't quite set out to write it that way . . .

Also, thanks for the feedback. 8)

janet_carter April 18 2006, 11:29:53 UTC

Hee! The image of them in their improvised outfits...brilliant!

kinetikatrue April 18 2006, 14:51:18 UTC

Thanks! The outfits were possibly the most fun evar, so, y'know, yay!

fairestcat April 18 2006, 13:15:20 UTC

HEEE. This is great fun! Fabulous job!

kinetikatrue April 18 2006, 14:24:03 UTC

Thankee, love! I had great fun channeling RayK(and doing the research to channel RayK, e.g. rereading a whole bunch of dS fic), so I'm glad you liked. 8)

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kinetikatrue April 19 2006, 00:39:08 UTC

Thank you!

*takes a bow*

I feel dumb asking this, but - what, pray tell, is Movement badfic? I am much confuzzled.

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kinetikatrue April 20 2006, 00:45:13 UTC

Ah. *feels greatly enlightened*

Anyway, glad that my badfic could bring you joy in any form, particularly since I was your promptee. 8)