Badfic Challenge by Loz...

Apr 18, 2006 16:40

Title: The Genius and the Genie
Author: Loz - lozenger8
Prompt: When Fraser picks up a dented bottle on the side of the road, Ray figures he's just being Canadian and doesn't pay much attention. But when he whips out a handkerchief to "polish it up a little", rather than sending the mud flying... a swarm of fog comes streaming from the top and resolves ( Read more... )

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ulthyrja April 18 2006, 10:13:59 UTC
That was cute! Loved Eric the genie and jealous Ray. *smirk*

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lozenger8 April 18 2006, 12:40:39 UTC
Thanks :D

Icon snap!

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lozenger8 April 18 2006, 12:41:15 UTC
Or not... because I chose the wrong icon. Never mind me. I'll be in the corner.

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china_shop April 18 2006, 11:20:32 UTC
There was this edge to his voice, a gruffness that usually only appeared when he was getting a massage or a blowjob or when he was under some other intense physical strain.

*giggles madly* This was wonderful!

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lozenger8 April 18 2006, 12:41:51 UTC
I suspected that was my best line. I tried to get more in later but my brain was fried. Thank you :D

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indywind April 18 2006, 16:44:44 UTC
Cute.
And again, eerily like an episode that just narrowly missed making the cut.

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lozenger8 April 18 2006, 22:08:31 UTC
Oh thank you :D

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lynnmonster April 20 2006, 03:16:43 UTC
Hee! And I'm so happy that Turnbull wound up with the genie! All that cleaning paid off!

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lozenger8 April 20 2006, 03:19:03 UTC
Thank you :D

I have a secret love for Turnbull, which isn't dented by Dean's choice of life-partner Tori Spelling.

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j_s_cavalcante April 20 2006, 06:53:42 UTC
Cracktastically good! I love Jealous!Ray and the nice genie and Fraser's aplomb. Love the initial Ray/Fraser argument, so similar to arguments they had in canon! Great fun!

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lozenger8 April 20 2006, 06:55:05 UTC
Aww thank you, you're too sweet.

If they'd had arguments quite like that in canon, there'd be even more spluttering and posting of caps of hand-holding.

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