Prompt #24 - "Symmetry" for malnpudl

Apr 03, 2009 18:29

Title: Symmetry
Author: akamine_chan
Characters: Diefenbaker, Benton Fraser/Ray Kowalski
Rating: R
Warnings: Some animal death due to natural selection. Not Diefenbaker.
Prompt: “People are not food.”
Length: 672 words
Notes: Many thanks to luzula for the last minute, lightning beta. She is my hero, many times over.

Symmetry )

dief, by: akamine_chan, f/k

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bakaknight April 4 2009, 00:55:30 UTC
You killed Dief's family. Oh, ow. Beautiful and ow.

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akamine_chan April 26 2009, 00:34:48 UTC
Hee. I figured I'd get in trouble for that. I'm glad you liked it anyway.

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mary_the_fan April 4 2009, 01:09:11 UTC
Aw, this is so sad and sweet! I love it. Fantastic job, dear.

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akamine_chan April 26 2009, 00:35:18 UTC
Thanks. Dief is one of my favorite characters to write...

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mizface April 4 2009, 01:16:53 UTC
Oh, aka, that was so beautiful and sad and poor Dief. And this line called to me:

Only strange eyes that share his hunger for pack.

That to me explains the two of them perfectly.

And I loved the coda at the end.

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akamine_chan April 26 2009, 00:36:28 UTC
Oh, I'm so glad you liked this, miz. I was worried that it wasn't working...

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akite April 4 2009, 01:25:03 UTC
*pets Dief* I'm so glad he found a pack again. Beautiful story.

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akamine_chan April 26 2009, 00:36:52 UTC
Thank you, m'dear. I'm glad this worked for you.

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waltzforanight April 4 2009, 02:04:59 UTC
Aww, this was beautiful, Aka! Poor Dief! And I absolutely second what miz said about only strange eyes that share his hunger for pack summing up Fraser and Dief perfectly. <3

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akamine_chan April 26 2009, 00:37:43 UTC
They are, in a lot of ways, very similar. Which is why they're so close, I think. Glad you liked.

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