Scene Stealer - Fic: Detective Armani

[aingeal8c]

Title: Detective Armani
Author: Aingeal
Rating: PG
Pairing: None, it's a gen, though I am sure those of you with slashy goggles on can make something of it.
Summary: Detective Armani reflects on a first meeting.
Thanks: Thank you to lozenger8 who answered my 11th hour need for a quick beta.
Notes: This second bit of fic is set during the first meeting

Comments

[dragonladyk]

Classic Ray.

You looked at me, really looked. You didn’t call me a jerk for insulting your dead father, you made me think about that on my own. I barely know you and yet you managed to look past the Armani.

Classic Benny.

Are you sure this isn't a transcript of a cut scene? *shifty eyes*

[aingeal8c]

Classic Ray.

You looked at me, really looked. You didn’t call me a jerk for insulting your dead father, you made me think about that on my own. I barely know you and yet you managed to look past the Armani.

Classic Benny.

Are you sure this isn't a transcript of a cut scene? *shifty eyes*

Thank you. No, not an actual transcript but one was used in the making of this fic.

[sdwolfpup]

Interesting look at Ray during this scene. I like how it leads Ray to seeking Fraser out and apologizing.

[aingeal8c]

Interesting look at Ray during this scene. I like how it leads Ray to seeking Fraser out and apologizing.

Thank you. It's interesting why Ray sought Fraser out later on.

[sharon28]

Oh wow, this is so good. You really get into Ray's head.

You even apologised ‘I’m sorry, Detective Armani’. You got all confused when I said that wasn’t my name.

Did Ray ever introduce himself to Fraser on screen? I'm blanking whether he did or not. Somehow I'm thinking it was off screen as I can't remember an introduction scene taking place between them.

[aingeal8c]

Oh wow, this is so good. You really get into Ray's head.

Thank you.

Did Ray ever introduce himself to Fraser on screen? I'm blanking whether he did or not. Somehow I'm thinking it was off screen as I can't remember an introduction scene taking place between them.

I don't think he did. I can't remember. He doesn't in the scene I described in the fic and I think then we switch to the consulate.

[aingeal8c]

Ahhhhh - it's instant, isn't it? I tell you, between this story and the one nakeisha wrote for this challenge, I am having to serioulsy re-think my 'no way! don't like it!' position on first person DS fic.

Yep it is instant nad glad it's helpung persuade you with first person ds fic :-)