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Twenty-two (Prompt 09, F/K)

Apr 06, 2007 12:20

Twenty-two
F/K, G, 597 words

( Ray had every right to talk to her, to touch her. Fraser had no claim over his person. )

Comments 31

vsee April 6 2007, 20:48:41 UTC

Um, is it wrong to get so giddy at jealous!Fraser? It just makes me so stupidly pleased. *g* Well, of course, what pleases me is when they get all potentially happy as a result. Oh, boys!

Vee

justbreathe80 April 11 2007, 14:20:27 UTC

Nope! It makes me happy too. *g*

Thanks!

tealc_spoo April 6 2007, 21:00:07 UTC

I love to see jealous Fraser, cause he hates to admit it so much! Lovely Ray, just lovely.

justbreathe80 April 11 2007, 14:20:56 UTC

Me too, because he wouldn't think of himself that way, but he IS. Thanks!

etcetera_cat April 6 2007, 23:30:28 UTC

I really enjoyed reading this. *<3's jealous Fraser*

justbreathe80 April 11 2007, 14:21:22 UTC

Awesome! Thank you!

keerawa April 7 2007, 05:28:31 UTC

"That sounds wonderful, Ray," Fraser said, pushing his chair out hard, almost enough to tip it over onto the floor, and grabbed his leather jacket.
Well someone's in a hurry. Hurray for Perceptive!Ray.

justbreathe80 April 11 2007, 14:21:50 UTC

Wouldn't you be? *g* YAY! Thanks.

snarkyducky April 7 2007, 06:00:50 UTC

and grabbed his leather jacket.

and why does "leather jacket" sound so much *hotter* when we're talking about Fraser? i mean, yeah, on any guy, a leather jacket is usually hot. but on Fraser? *wolf whistles*

♥

justbreathe80 April 11 2007, 14:22:25 UTC

Because buttoned-up proper Mountie in the old leather jacket is AWESOME.

*licks*

Thanks!