Possession (PG-13): Written for karrenia_rune

[mouse42]

Title: Possession
Author: DangerMouse (mouse42)
Rating: PG-13
Written for: karrenia_rune
Word Count: 2287
Summary: Takes place during "The Assignment", a take on what the Pah-wraith was thinking while it possessed Keiko O'Brien's body.
A/N: Hope you enjoy it, karrenia_rune! It was fun to write. A little twisted, but fun! Thanks to jayiin, hedigewan, and doroc_sabah for the beta read! Any mistakes found

Comments

[nyssa23]

Creepy, but well-done! This has a really nice "Paradise Lost" feel to it that I like quite a bit. ^_^

[mouse42]

Hee! Thanks. I was going for creepy. After all, the entire episode struck me as more than a little creepy, not to mention sinister.

Assuming the thing that took her over was a Pah-Wraith, which, interestingly, was never specifically said, I couldn't help but think how much more 'with it' the Pah-Wraith was, compared to the Prophets. No standing around making broad statements about the future and the past for her, no way. She had a pretty solid plan, which I find downright nifty.

Thank you for commenting! It's greatly appreciated and I'm glad you liked it! :)

yay

[karrenia_rune]

Thank you for writing this, nicely done and from the POV
of the Pah-wraith host, suprsing and eerie, but in a good way.
It also brings back fond memories of events from the episode.
I really liked it.- Thanks again and take care, Karrenia

Re: yay

[mouse42]

Huzzah! I'm so happy you liked it. This was actually the third story of four I attempted to write for your requests. I kept changing my mind from this to that and this story is the one I decided to put up. :)

I picked mostly because it was eerie, something I usually struggle with. So far, it seems like it went over pretty well. The idea I had to was to do the episode from another character's POV, since Chief O'Brien was the main character for the ep. I tried Rom, Odo, even Dax, but finally went, hey, there is a Pah-wraith here. Might as well use it.

Thanks for the challenge and I'm glad you enjoyed the end product! :)

[telemicus]

I'm late on commenting, but this story was a wonderful treat! You have the Pah Wraith (OR WHATEVER it was!) down perfectly, sinister and without regret. It fits in very smoothly with the episode too, and fleshes it out amazingly. Also, it is really difficult to do present tense writing yet this is flawless. THANK YOU!

[psychicvanity]

Man, this was amazing. I love it; and will probably quote it for the rest of time, which, really, is how you know I liked it. Thanks ever so! Now I have to see that ep...