Not So Harmless: Foreshadows

Apr 21, 2009 04:26

Title: Not So Harmless: Foreshadows

Author: Raitear

Rating: Pg 13

Summary:

In a world where the impossible is often proven to be possible, where the most extraordinary powers can be unleashed with just a thought, everyone seems to forget that one person with a match can still light the world on fire.

When it all comes down to it, loyalty to a friend ( Read more... )

author: raitear

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nikki_cee April 22 2009, 01:03:12 UTC
Baah cliffhangers... But it was still good, love how Bobby's gone for help in looking for John :) Never been a train, nor am I'm American, so no help here :/

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raitear April 22 2009, 05:06:24 UTC
Sorry for the cliffhanger, glad you still like it anyways. thanks for commenting. =P

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lux_apollo April 22 2009, 04:22:46 UTC
One minor bone I just have to pick... Storm's first name is spelled 'Ororo'. :-)

(and the plot thickens... dun dun dun...)

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raitear April 22 2009, 05:07:37 UTC
Fixed it. Thanks for that, for some reason I always hear Ororo's name and think Aurora, is horrible I know.

Yay, my story really does have plot. Thanks for commenting.

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evildevilangel April 22 2009, 17:41:16 UTC
Gotta say, I'm getting rather addicted to this story. Keep it up!

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