Pyrokinetic Manipulator - Chapter one

Oct 30, 2006 23:54

Author: Sj-snugglebug
Title: Pyrokinetic Manipulator
Genre: General/Romance
Rating: PG-13 (At the most, I hope)
Pairings: Not really any in this chapter, but you could go ‘Pyro/Iceman - John/Bobby’ at the end if you really wanted to.
Warnings: I’m not sure ‘slash’ would be a warning here. (=
Disclaimer: Not mine; never was, never will be. )=
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title: p, rating: pg-13, author: sj_snugglebug, fiction: series

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fastforwardlife October 30 2006, 16:09:38 UTC
Absolutely brill. I love seeing John (and Bobby of course) as kids, and your characterisation has got to be most spot-on.
I look forward to seeing/hearing/reading more.
>rilind

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oraclejenn October 30 2006, 16:32:56 UTC
Very good characterization!

Can't wait to read more

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lux_apollo October 30 2006, 16:43:47 UTC
Cool. Keep writing.

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sj_snugglebug October 30 2006, 23:08:34 UTC
Thanks for the feedback! It's really appreciated.
- I like kid John and Bobby too. =P

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v_i_d_e October 30 2006, 23:59:52 UTC
*deep breath* Squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!

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