Spiral: Chapter 10

[lux_apollo]

Title: Spiral
Author: lux_apollo
Rating: R for language.
Pairings: Bobby/John
Summary: The tension builds towards disaster. Bobby and Justin are at MIT. They share a moment. Justin has a vision. John drives the Brotherhood to the mission location and gets lectured by Magneto. Justin wakes up. Bobby and Justin set out to prevent a disaster from happening.

Comments

[stand_ford]

OMG, is it my birthday and i just happened not to remember it? My three favorite fics had an update today!!!!! *don't tell anyone but i liked this better than any other* ...anyway, i used to think i wouldn't like if Bobby and Justin got into a serious relationship (like a kissing kind of relationship) but i loved it. I can picture it in my head as one of the best...best!! (sorry, i started writing that sentence thinking i don't what and i just didn't know how to end it so let's just leave it in Perfection..)

Whatever...
Monday is not soon enough!!! and damn the hour you thought today wasn't the day to post 11!!! Just kidding, but omg, what's that? TVnews just said that, starting today, weekends no longer exist!!! So tomorrow is Monday? I think tomorrow is Monday, do you think tomorrow is monday? lol, I'm just too stupid...

[lux_apollo]

Um. Wow.

*Jaffar voice*

Patience, Iago.

It will be worth it. I think.

[yalover]

Read it earlier but logged on now to comment.

And now for my traditonal yays *Cough*
Yay for Bobby/Justin!
Yay for new chapter.

One question: if Justin could sense someone manipulating minds (mesmero right) then won't that person know that Justin is a telepath? Wouldn't they see it if they read his mind or if they can't wouldn't that be a read flag?

Bah Telepaths! Freaky as can be....

P.S. Loved it.

[lux_apollo]

The problem with Mastermind is that he's an incomplete telepath... He can do shit to your mind, but he's no Xavier or Frost. If someone is shielded, and unless they are actively doing something telepathic, you would have no way of knowing whether they were a telepath or not. At least, not someone of Mastermind's abilities

[yalover]

That was a very detailed and helpful explanation...
Bah! Freaky telepaths...

[lux_apollo]

Oh, and another thing... Justin's not good at location by sensing things like this yet (if he ever is...). Mastermind, however, is. He tells Magneto where he think's Justin is. If it had been Emma or Xavier, they wouldn't be guessing, they'd *know*.

Justin knows someone is there doing something, but he couldn't tell you where. Just nearby enough for him to feel it. Though, I'm sure those feelings would get stronger as the person moved closer... Just not accurate at all.

[lux_apollo]

I'm glad you are enjoying it!

[lux_apollo]

Heh, well yeah. I couldn't resist poking the helmet a bit... and then that was a natural extension.

I apologize again for the cliffhanger... I'm glad it's keeping your interest.

[bulma90_13]

i love this story. just love.

AH! i HAVE to know who said that! and since i'm a little late on commenting, i see we get a new chapter monday!? i can hardly contain my excitement! :D

[lux_apollo]

*smiles* Thanks.