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First Fic and inspired by the prompts

Jul 11, 2006 04:00

Title: Knives
Author: xfirespritex
Summary: Pyro and Iceman meet again in unusual circumstances.
Rating: R/slight NC-17 for cursing and sexual situations.
AN: It's my first Bobby/John fic and the first time I've written anything like this. Please give me constructive criticism.

( Knives )

title: k, prompt: violence, rating: nc-17, fiction: one-shots, author: xfirespritex

Comments 5

clerical_error July 11 2006, 09:46:47 UTC

*gapes* Wow.
xD I love seeing kink in a pairing like this. It fits really well, but no-one ever seems to write it. Oo

train_diskense July 11 2006, 14:23:32 UTC

YES! Knifeplay is seriously awesome. ^-^ *rereads and grins* Very very nice.

lux_apollo July 11 2006, 15:21:53 UTC

*groans*

I only wish you'd pushed it a little further! Well done short. The ending is quite open... but that's probably your intention.

xfirespritex July 11 2006, 23:47:21 UTC

yeah I couldn't make myself bring it any further in my first fic. maybe next time if inspiration strikes me again.

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Re: I realize that this is late, but... xfirespritex June 16 2007, 14:54:21 UTC

thank you very much for the criticism! I agree, I realized I had done an info dump but I didn't know how to fix it. I'll try the dialogue thing next time.