Leave a comment

Comments 7

lizamanynames November 12 2008, 01:05:51 UTC
AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAAH I WAS RIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIHT!!!!

*ahem*

Fantastic fantastic episode, GREAT cliffhanger, loved he scene with the multiple Donna, and Donna Prime's solution - brillantly typicly human!

ALso loved the backstory, too - so you're a subscriber to the Cartmell Masterplan, huh? At least as far as having "The Other"

Loved the rest of the council, too, and the idea of there being a "Harmony" that The Eye of Harmony" was named after. Brilliant!!

Caught some errs:

Now immortal can a walking vegetable be?”

Uhm, is this meant to be "how immortal..."?

She was part of a distressing trend among Gallifreyian's

No apostrophe to make the plural. Just "Gallifreyans"

“Harmony what if the planet is inhabited? What if they people are using what we need?”, she asked.

Uh, is she talking to herself?

Donna looked at Turn Right s she thought

"as she thought" maybe?

<>I;m willing to bet in Susan's little melodrama,

"I'm willing to bet..."

Anyway, fantastic eppy, on the edge of my seat!!

Reply

usmc75 November 12 2008, 01:10:26 UTC
Thanks, I used Rass, Omega and The Other as the trilogy and then added the others as fit. Harmony is in fact from Eye of Harmony, Valdos is the creator of Validium from Silver Nemesis, and Diplos is from the great seal of Diplos from the key of time. I was hoping people wouldn't know who I made up and who was established :)

Reply

lizamanynames November 12 2008, 08:00:29 UTC
And a good job you did too, as I wasn't sure who was established and who wasn't!

Reply

usmc75 November 12 2008, 01:12:45 UTC
And made the corrections....have a favorite typo pie?

Reply


Leave a comment

Up