Unfinished Symphony-E6-I Do-Part Nine

[usmc75]

Prelude
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven
Part Eight

Unfinished Symphony Episode Six

I Do-Part Nine

Comments

[lizamanynames]

I love this ep and all the little character moments - and I cheered when Donna slapped the Doctor because that's exactly what I wanted to do to him for that! That entire scene was my favourite, I think, especially when they couldn't stop laughing.

On small thing:

His words degenerated into a scream a she passed out

...I think that's supposed to be "His words degenerated into a scream as he passed out"?

Awesome work, keep it up! ^_^

[usmc75]

Thanks, this has been the hardest one to write yet. My mind is so scared of making it boring it wants to inject real sci fi drama into it. And I keep telling it that the human drama is much stronger, so thanks for the kind words...they mean a lot.