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Unfinished Symphony-E6-I Do-Part Eight

Sep 22, 2008 10:17

Prelude
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
Part Four
Part Five
Part Six
Part Seven

Unfinished Symphony Episode Six

I Do-Part Eight

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Comments 5

lizamanynames September 22 2008, 20:04:46 UTC

Oh, ow. Poor Martha. Poor Thomas. I really hope it works out.

Loved the Doctor/River Song scene - very sweet. Also loved how they beat the empaths - and who everyone thought of. Awwww.

Can't wait to see how it all turns out, and what happened to the other Doctor Adam saw, or whatever the heck that was....

usmc75 September 22 2008, 20:35:57 UTC

Thanks, I had a whole other way for them to beat the empaths but I got it done and hated the way it sounded. So had to scrap it and stat over. I like this one better.

usmc75 September 23 2008, 03:23:50 UTC

So did the kiss between them seem forced? Cause I wanted it to be organic.

lizamanynames September 23 2008, 04:03:24 UTC

Oh hell no, you handled that perfectly! I love that who kissed who first becomes the source of many later arguments. XD

crackdmoonlight August 19 2010, 01:23:57 UTC

Oh, Martha, don't run away!
And I love the chemistry between the Doctor and River.