Unfinished Symphony E4-Part Four

[usmc75]

Prelude
Part One
Part Two
Part Three

Unfinished Symphony Episode Four

The Innocent-Part Four

“So do you understand?”, The Doctor asked Sarah Jane.

“I do but how can you be sure that will even happen?”

He flashed her a grin, a grin she hadn't seen in far too long and said simply, “Trust me Sarah Jane to do my part.”

Before she

Comments

[simplyn2deep]

bad trick you played with the link!

lol

and poor Tosi! having to see and feel what the Doctor saw and felt. thats horrible!

and very clever getting Tosi to stay like that.

I can't wait to read what happens next

[usmc75]

Yes the Doctor is just a wee bit smart:)

[whtamarshmallow]

My gosh that had to be horrible for TOSI! I hope she didn't hurt the case too badly.

I learned my lesson last time and didn't go to the link, lol!

[usmc75]

well the Doctor was ready for the hit to the case, and good for u on the pink :)

[whtamarshmallow]

*g*

[usmc75]

The link that is :)

Any problems with all the telepathic talk? Or was it understandable ?

[lizamanynames]

I kind of especially love the Doctor more than usual in this ep. *big hugs*

...and the link was brilliant.

[usmc75]

Thx. So u didn't find the telepathic stuff too much ?

[lizamanynames]

No, that was perfectly done.

[usmc75]

Thanks..I get worried when I am out there on a tight rope :)

[crackdmoonlight]

Still madly in love with this fanfic! I love all the references sprinkled throughout. I could totally picture the doctor kickin' back in the Tardis watching Back to the Future, watching Firefly, or reading Hitchhikers. Lol.

I'm also super happy that he saved TOSI. She reminds me of Marvin from Hitchhikers Guide to the Galaxy. What with being suicidal and whatnot.

[usmc75]

That's cool! I kinda based her on a female Marvin, just not as morose :)

Thanks for the comments, nice to know someone is still reading it :)