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sfemonster January 2 2006, 01:40:58 UTC
Versus the black and white inks you showed me I'm DIGGIN' the colour. It pulls everything together. Good choice.

Also Michelle's orange shirt.

I'm sort of a detail junkie, so I'd be all "OH MAN DRAW HER DORM ROOM" but no one has patience for that, so I can deal with the gradient-y backgrounds. The really thick gutters look good with your flowy inking style. They'd look silly with my bic pen panels, but you actually put effort into your pages, so it looks good.

Y'know what would make this more awesome? Page 2. Jeezis.

MICHELLE HAS A TRUNK? MAN. ROCK ON MICHELLE.

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ozymandiusjones January 2 2006, 01:45:55 UTC
I can "see" these colors and textures on that nice glossy comic book paper. Really. And I can't think of anything helpfully helpful, so...yeah.

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Good Job! lilrunningmouth January 2 2006, 02:16:09 UTC
You're work is, as always, way better than anything I could do, so I really don't feel it's my place to critique.

I think you did a fantastic job, though, especially on the lettering

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