. . . is this just more blabbing about doom, or is it worthwhile?? you tell me.

Oct 26, 2006 02:22

. . . I think it was four of those lines came from a sketch I wrote a couple of weeks ago, but otherwise I just tossed the whole thing off from the top of my head. I want you to tell me what you think and be honest ( Read more... )

witness your own downfall., poems

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chrisfarleyfan October 31 2006, 05:30:14 UTC
I like the topic a lot and there are a shitton of good images. i mean it's really dark but i think it's good. maybe put in more images and description. it's cool though.

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trial_in_dust November 1 2006, 15:54:30 UTC
i really like the first two paragraphs. this reminds me of the opening of the first godspeed you! black emperor album, what with its fire & doom & whatnot. also, a paul auster book who's title is escaping me at the moment... my feedback always compares. apologies.

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drumoflife November 2 2006, 22:04:04 UTC
...... I have some choice words for you! but I'm not gonna say it cos I'm afraid I'll get arrested jk hahahaha : P

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trial_in_dust November 3 2006, 17:26:52 UTC
.....um.....................................?

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drumoflife November 3 2006, 23:07:11 UTC
.... I hope you are not offended.

I like to joke around a lot and your "apologies" really set off my dry sense of humor

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trial_in_dust November 9 2006, 15:03:58 UTC
no offense taken, man, just momentary confusion. it's a daily occurance for me, so no worries.

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