okay, since im not satisfied w/ comment..i shall comment more coz you deserved more..i'd love to quote every single scene that caught my interest..but it'd mean killing the 4300 characters limit OTL
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birthday to sleeping scene Jonghyun was so cute, acted childishly esp.when he wished for Minho to never get what he wished for..and actually feeling guilty over it^^
Jonghyun throws some notsofunny joke but actually laughed his life out of his lungs scene love to know that Minho actually enjoy the way Jonghyun's act not the joke
short messages just sooo cute..Jonghyun asked OnTae to help him with it
refrigerator scene "kim family tradition, passed down through generations-oh my god," jonghyun stops mid-air with the manual in his hand to look at minho very seriously, "you are perhaps be the only non-clan member to know of such techniques." ... minho rolls his eyes, "take them back, i don't want them."I LOLed..thx..that Jonghyun didnt use his family tradition to the refrigerator
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tooth brush scene i think it was the cutest scene ever..Jonghyun tried to save Minho's tooth brush from germs and Minho who actually like to try on Jonghyun tooth brush
let's get rid of the pimple scene Minho was sooo cute by helping Jonghyun to get rid of his problem "thanks for all your help," jonghyun beams as he snuggles his head into the crook of minho's neck and shoulder, rubs a little, "you really came through for me today." --> cute
tv watching scene XXDD..Ninja!OnKey is on my radar and the heartbroken-Jonghyun just too cute “yeah,” and then minho reaches for the spoon, but jonghyun takes it in his own hand, digging out a generous scoop, turning and bringing the mouthful to minho’s mouth, airplane-style. “here,” jonghyun says, smiling, “it’s really good.” minho fights the urge to take the spoon from him and eat the ice cream himself, and opens his mouth. he feels kind of silly letting jonghyun feed him, but the ice cream is good, and it seems to make jonghyun happy, so minho lets him. --> I LOVE THIS SCENE
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Well, first of all. I'm in awe of your writing style, tis very unique. I believe the adequate word would be, "Raw". It's gritty and painfully realistic.
The best scene is this chapter has to be the computer scene; with Minho's unknown sampling. It's a disturbing (it makes the part of me that focuses on cleanliness wince) and strangely exciting.
Please do update; I like how Minho is on his way to becoming a creeper ( if he isn't already )
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loudly enough for jonghyun to hear, to which kibum replies,
"who the hell are you talking about?"
pwned, on to the next part!
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But it's not enough...my comment is not enough...
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birthday to sleeping scene
Jonghyun was so cute, acted childishly esp.when he wished for Minho to never get what he wished for..and actually feeling guilty over it^^
Jonghyun throws some notsofunny joke but actually laughed his life out of his lungs scene
love to know that Minho actually enjoy the way Jonghyun's act not the joke
short messages
just sooo cute..Jonghyun asked OnTae to help him with it
refrigerator scene
"kim family tradition, passed down through generations-oh my god," jonghyun stops mid-air with the manual in his hand to look at minho very seriously, "you are perhaps be the only non-clan member to know of such techniques."
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minho rolls his eyes, "take them back, i don't want them."I LOLed..thx..that Jonghyun didnt use his family tradition to the refrigerator ( ... )
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tooth brush scene
i think it was the cutest scene ever..Jonghyun tried to save Minho's tooth brush from germs and Minho who actually like to try on Jonghyun tooth brush
let's get rid of the pimple scene
Minho was sooo cute by helping Jonghyun to get rid of his problem
"thanks for all your help," jonghyun beams as he snuggles his head into the crook of minho's neck and shoulder, rubs a little, "you really came through for me today." --> cute
tv watching scene
XXDD..Ninja!OnKey is on my radar and the heartbroken-Jonghyun just too cute
“yeah,” and then minho reaches for the spoon, but jonghyun takes it in his own hand, digging out a generous scoop, turning and bringing the mouthful to minho’s mouth, airplane-style.
“here,” jonghyun says, smiling, “it’s really good.”
minho fights the urge to take the spoon from him and eat the ice cream himself, and opens his mouth. he feels kind of silly letting jonghyun feed him, but the ice cream is good, and it seems to make jonghyun happy, so minho lets him. --> I LOVE THIS SCENE ( ... )
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SPOT. MINE. MINE.
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im off to the next part!
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I'm in awe of your writing style, tis very unique. I believe the adequate word would be, "Raw". It's gritty and painfully realistic.
The best scene is this chapter has to be the computer scene; with Minho's unknown sampling. It's a disturbing (it makes the part of me that focuses on cleanliness wince) and strangely exciting.
Please do update; I like how Minho is on his way to becoming a creeper ( if he isn't already )
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