Oh god... on one hand, I'm scared of guro (especially if it's extreme) but on the other hand this sounds so interesting... s-so seconding-thirding whatever, I guess
I was just about to request something very similar, so... I think I'm going to try this. I may not get to it until the weekend, but I'm going to give it a shot, anon. ♥
Fill: [Exquisite] 1/2
anonymous
April 4 2010, 07:19:32 UTC
SORRY THIS WILL EPIC FAIL, I'VE NEVER WRITTEN GURO BEFORE D8 And excuse Shizuo's OOC, maybe he just likes pain? He's always hurting Izaya so I thought he'd want to make this as painful as possible
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Fill: [Exquisite] 2/2
anonymous
April 4 2010, 07:21:15 UTC
Izaya leans down, teeth scraping Shizuo’s earlobe and bruising already broken skin as his tongue and teeth travel harshly down the man’s neck. He continues to thrust, the shudders of pain wracking his abdomen intensifying the in-out movements and making his hands shake in sheer pleasure. He bathes in the pain, knowing that he’s covering the ground with his blood from the stomach wound; the red liquid dribbles from his mouth, and every time that he takes a breath he can feel blood stick to the back of his throat and broken ribs ache for him to stop moving
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Re: Fill: [Exquisite] 2/2
anonymous
April 5 2010, 01:05:08 UTC
OP FUCKING LOVES YOU
hnnnnnnnnngh its cool man I dont think most people really write guro in the first place haha but it's awesome for you to do your first one here and it totally rocked!!
man its hard to make me feel all queasy just from prose but loool you did it. brb vomiting deliciously ♥
Re: Fill: [Exquisite] 2/2
anonymous
April 5 2010, 02:51:25 UTC
I don't think I'd ever read written guro before this, just seen the drawn stuff, so I didn't know what I was going to think about this. Verdict: SKHS;DHS;KSDNHKS. Author!anon, you ROCK. I think the thing about the cum getting in the wound at the end just gave me a new kink. Btw, I can see the whole pain thing being IC for Shizuo if he gets carried away enough, so... well done. <3
Re: Fill: [Exquisite] 2/2
anonymous
April 5 2010, 23:19:49 UTC
SECONDING WHAT THE OTHER ANONS HAVE SAID, THIS WAS DELICIOUS. <3
You'd never think it was your first time, really! You've got that vividness down, which is really key in these things you know? I think my favourite parts were Shizuo ripping the wound even more, and the last bit about the cum going into the bandages. UNF UNF UNF. <3
Re: Fill: [Exquisite] 2/2
anonymous
April 12 2010, 08:36:20 UTC
t-this was seriously your first time writing guro? Oh lawdy that was hot. I am impressed and turned on and fsdflkjsdf-ing all over the place at this because it was so great.
DELICIOUS GURO.
i want to be torn between fapping and throwing up. the more fucked up it is, the more i will love you.
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And if the whole thing is written with delicious dark humor I'd fucking WORSHIP the author!anon.
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op will wait until the end of the world, anon.
i love you.
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FUCKING
LOVES YOU
hnnnnnnnnngh
its cool man I dont think most people really write guro in the first place haha but it's awesome for you to do your first one here and it totally rocked!!
man its hard to make me feel all queasy just from prose but loool you did it.
brb vomiting deliciously ♥
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You'd never think it was your first time, really! You've got that vividness down, which is really key in these things you know? I think my favourite parts were Shizuo ripping the wound even more, and the last bit about the cum going into the bandages. UNF UNF UNF. <3
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