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PART 6

Dec 24, 2010 21:21

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Welcome Home [1/?] anonymous January 6 2011, 10:07:20 UTC

A/N: So, um. Yeah, I'm trying this. (First potential author!anon above). Though to the other author!anon; feel free to fill it, too. ;o; I don't wanna take up the space. That's why I'll be posting any other parts to this as a reply to this post. It'd be cool to have two fills, seriously <33 Especially considering how I'm such a noob writer, ahah. Excuse any OOCness or grammar/spelling mistakes.

It had been a long day.

Heiwajima Shizuo silently thanked the heavens at the sight of his apartment complex at the end of the road, quickening his pace just a smidge to get there faster.

Today, Tom had more people to attend to than usual. The man had told Shizuo he was allowed to leave if he wanted too, but Shizuo politely declined, instead deciding to stick it out until the end. If something were to happen to his friend, he knew it would be his fault-and he simply wouldn’t be able to live with that.

Ding!A split second after, the elevator’s doors opened, revealing his floor’s hallway. The blond fished his keys out of his pocket as he ( ... )

Welcome Home [2/?] anonymous January 6 2011, 10:14:31 UTC

Izaya didn’t reply as he continued walking, finally reaching the blond. Both his hands came up and pressed against Shizuo’s chest. Careful not to destroy the cupcake in his hand, he pushed gently against Shizuo’s shoulders, causing the blond to step backwards and fall onto the chair that was already behind him. Izaya followed him down, straddling the man’s chest before leaning in as close as humanly possible.

“Come on, Shizu-chan,” Izaya lowered his voice to a sultry whisper, his lips brushing against the blond’s ears with each word.

A tremor ran down Shizuo’s spine. He had not realized he had closed his eyes until he felt something soft pressing on his lips, and amber came in contact with pink.

“Just have a taste…”

Shizuo, feeling his resolve slowly fade, tentatively took a bite out of the pastry.

It was deliciousShizuo glared lightly as he felt Izaya moving the cupcake out of his range, the brunette’s lips forming into a smirk ( ... )

two OPs here ヾ(*⌒∇⌒)八(⌒∇⌒*)ツ anonymous January 6 2011, 21:47:08 UTC

ADSKJFGSKEYUGF WHAT IS THIS INCREDIBLE THING, I DON'T EVEN~~~
well, we know that's what we requested but still...

YAY FOR PWP !!!!! *q* or for whatever you will feel fit to deliver us, for that matter... with such a level of epic writing and kinkiness, there's not much we can do apart from muffling our squeels at 2 o'clock in the morning and bouncing around all day in school !!

we can't believe you're actually planning to fill out every single kink of our very TLDR request, after such a great beginning we might end up melting to a puddle before we see the end of this...

on last thing, we're really sorry for bringing such a late reply, we know for a fact you deserve much more than this !!
So we might as well say it now: I guess we're knid of the slow responding type, but we swear to God Izaya that we'll never give you up, never let you down, and love this fill forever !!

A!A anonymous January 6 2011, 22:16:47 UTC

;w; Thank you so much~

Yeah, it's pretty gonna be PWP or in occasion fluff or something. If any kind of plot forms, it totally wasn't intentional, ahaha. And ;w; THANK YOU AGAIN. I've never had anyone call my writing epic <3 ((but then again, I'm still a noob in the kinkmeme)). Seriously, your review makes me happy on the insideee~~

Lol, yes. I'm planning to TRY. If I feel that it comes out to fail I might skip it, orz. (As long as it's a puddle of chocolate. Chocolate's good).

Lol, that's fine. I have a hunch you're those two OPs of the epic-sauce story rhyme, right? Lolol, if so; you live in a completely diff. time zone, it's fine.

Wow. That's a serious commitment you did there. Swear to Izaya. And gah. Half-rick roll (I like you guys already).

THANK YOU, again. Long reply is long. orz;; I'll try updating soon.

oh well, might as well start calling myself OP#2 all over again ~ anonymous January 7 2011, 00:43:10 UTC

*SIGH*... exposed after only one comment... why did I kind of see that one coming ;D
but seriously, are we really that recognizable ?? could my stalking be compromised ?? OH CRAP ヽ(ｏ`皿′ｏ)ﾉ

yup, that's how I am, never do things halfway... and what do you mean, chocolate is good ??? CHOCOLATE IS ULTIMATELY YUMMILICOUS, is what I say !! which is why I was stuffing myself with truffes while reading your fill for the first time, and I now am somehow starting to associate kinky stuff with chocolate goodness OTL

anyway, you're welcome !! I mean, I know I'm always big on fangirling and all, but there are some authors of whom I can say their writing style really appeals to me, and you are one of those. lucky me XD

and don't worry about writing everything, it does seem like a tremendous amount of work to me... but then again, if you feel up to it, I'm all for !!! ♥♥♥ *insert fangirl squeals here*

you know what ?? I totally beat you in the long!comment department... so there !!! ROFL

Re: Welcome Home [2/?] anonymous January 6 2011, 23:48:32 UTC

Can I just say that you're amazing? And I'm shamelessly wanting to read more of this.

PS: this is the second potential author!anon, but I'm loving that you filled this out, bb~ <3

A!A anonymous January 7 2011, 09:06:24 UTC

I am quite amazing, are't I? It's only natural. Don't worry.

Well thanks, I'm loving that you're filling it out, too. We'll be two amazing kinky anon!authors, bahaha~

Welcome Home [3/?] anonymous January 7 2011, 09:03:58 UTC

Shizuo realized what Izaya was doing much too late and was unable to complain, his eyes rolling back into his head in pure pleasure at the feel of the brunet’s skilled tongue work along his shaft. Izaya swirled the wet appendage around the shaft like he would a popsicle, leaving his fingers to grab onto what he couldn’t fit inside. He began to thrust the blond’s member into his mouth, bobbing his head up and down the swollen cock. Shizuo let out breathy moans, trying hard not to thrust into the hot cavern.

Izaya pulled away, looking up at Shizuo through his lashes. “Don’t hold back, Shizu-chan~ I’m here to… relax you after a stressful day at work,” he reassured almost breathlessly, same smirk curving its way onto his lips ( ... )

Late OP#1 is late... anonymous January 7 2011, 20:11:48 UTC

Hi dear author (￣▽￣)ノ I'm sorry for the late comment... (friggin computer issues)

You know what? YOUR WRITING IS FREAKIN' YUMMYSMUTTYKINKALICOUS. It even make me invent new words.
It might be due to all the chocolate I ate while reading, too... (I blame OP#2 for that ¬.¬ )

I can't wait to read more foodplay (*゜Д゜*) !!! *drools in anticipation*

Captcha agrees: leardely success

A!A #1 anonymous January 8 2011, 04:23:40 UTC

Looks like now us author!anons have to start numbering ourselves, too...

xDD It's fineeee~ <3 As I said; I totally understand the lateness.

;w; Thankssomuch. <33 Chocolate is yummilicious, though...

Soon enough, soon enough~

A!A #1 anonymous January 8 2011, 17:20:09 UTC

orz, I realise I'm such a retard. Lookit all those formatting errors... ;w;

... Just ignore them, please. <3

Welcome Home [4/?] anonymous January 8 2011, 22:05:50 UTC

Finally, Izaya lowered his head to the creamed tip and gave it a lick, eliciting a sharp intake of breath from Shizuo. Izaya gave a small smirk at the sound, loving the feeling of having this control over the blond.

“I think it needs something more…” Izaya said, pulling his head away and tapping his finger to his chin. “Ah! I know~” the man bounced up to his feet, strolling over to the refrigerator.

“F-flea, where the fuck are you going?” Shizuo asked incredulously, wondering where the informant could possibly be going at a time like this, when his arousal was throbbing so intensely that it was beginning to hurt ( ... )

OP#2 anonymous January 8 2011, 23:27:32 UTC

AGSDFGAHDSJLDNG CHOCOLATE SAUCE.

THAT'S IT, NOW YOU'VE DONE IT.
*dies*

Welcome Home [5/?] anonymous January 8 2011, 22:28:10 UTC

“Won’t happen again,” the brunet murmured around the tip, giving it one long suck before pulling away only slightly to run his tongue along the parts he had not reached before, lapping up at the whipped cream and chocolate at the base of the blond’s cock. Izaya circled his hand around the top, pumping Shizuo at a quick pace while he nipped and sucked at the sides of his length.

After a few seconds, Shizuo came, tightening his grip on Izaya’s brown locks and groaning. “FuckIzaya pulled away, smirking down at the new white substance that joined in the fray ( ... )

Welcome Home [6/?] anonymous January 8 2011, 22:39:43 UTC

Izaya had no hesitation in responding, repeating Shizuo’s actions and moaned again, louder than before. Shizuo growled lowly as the feeling to take the flea right then and there flooded every fiber of his being ( ... )

OP#2 back to haunt you anonymous January 8 2011, 23:49:50 UTC

OMG, I love those last lines. And the kind-of-maybe-angsty-like feeling Izaya is giving off... d(-_☆) ｸﾞｯ!!
See, you do have some kind of plot creeping in on the edges after all !! ;D

*crawls back to her coffin*

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