We were doomed from the start, as lovers are

Feb 08, 2009 12:37

Title: We were doomed from the start, as lovers are
Author: dropkickchristy
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Ryden
POV: Ryan
Summary:
Think of those dry heaving sobs, the kind that rack through your body, tearing you apart inside out.  It’s that kind of sobbing where the only sound coming out is a croak, where your breathing is frantic because the crying is hindering delivery ( Read more... )

bandom, slash, cheating, ryden, patd, standalone

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apples_kiwi February 9 2009, 11:39:11 UTC
This was heartbreaking. D:
Beautifully written, but sooo sad.
It made me want to punch Brendon in the face, really hard. Then a curb stomp.
Poor Ryan. *huugglless*

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dropkickchristy February 9 2009, 13:13:40 UTC
Aw, thanks! I'm really glad you liked it. <3

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roses_n_rain February 9 2009, 12:26:21 UTC
Oh, this is so sad.

I really want to karate-chop Brendon into pieces and give Ryan a hug and a plate of snickerdoodles. :]

A kiss. You taste of other boys. All minty and all wrong.

Ah, I broke at that line.

<33

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dropkickchristy February 9 2009, 13:14:39 UTC
Thankss! Snickerdoodles can fix almost anything. <3

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mere_thnetos February 9 2009, 17:21:07 UTC
Oh goodness this was heartbreaking and beautiful and I love your writing style. <3

And, also, that Brand New song fucking rocks.

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dropkickchristy February 9 2009, 21:15:13 UTC
Thanks, man!
Yeah, it's pretty much my favorite by Brand New. =D

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shattered_ink February 9 2009, 18:40:38 UTC
This is beautiful. Utterly beautiful. I just love it, that's really all I can say.

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dropkickchristy February 9 2009, 21:15:42 UTC
Wow, I'm really glad you liked it so much. Thanks! <3

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justsomehippie February 11 2009, 22:38:41 UTC
oh, that was fucking gorgeous. absolutely brilliant. i loved it.

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dropkickchristy February 11 2009, 23:04:18 UTC
TY! <3
I'm glad you liked it. =D

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