Spin The Bottle

[drawingblinds]

This was originally a drabble, which got out of hand and grew into a ficlet.

Title: Spin The Bottle. I'm so original.
Author: drawingblinds
Date: May 2007
Rating: PG
Pairing: Posner/Rudge
Words: 368
Notes: I think this is technically slash, although it also isn't. Yeah. So if the idea of the pairing squicks you the hell out, don't worry, it's not hardcore!

Comments

[orangesparks]

Rudge didn't much care where the bottle was pointing as the fear on the other boy's face cut through the haze of smoke, and made him feel almost hurt.

Aw.

I also love how Rudge has likened the whole situation to being in a match: These were the rules of play, so he ignored all distractions.

Pretty.

[drawingblinds]

Heehee. Merci!

[solvent90]

Oh, Rudge. I read him as the straightest of the bunch and, oddly, that just makes this work better - it's so sweet, this. *melts*

[drawingblinds]

Thank you for your feedback. :) I do too, and I think why it works is because it's not trying to be sexual. He does what is essentially a sexual act, but there aren't sexual feelings behind it.

[sullen_hearts]

It's lovely, ridiculously lovely. Rudge/Posner is really, really hot. Mmmmm.

And then you finished with this:

in the understanding that they'd had that seventh term, after all.

And that made it even better :)

[drawingblinds]

Thankyou for the feedback! :)

[trekkiepirate]

*Makes another check in "the List of Guys Whe've Paired Posner With"*

I really liked the story! Good job!

[drawingblinds]

XD oh yes. Thank you for the feedback. :)