Nile Blue 29

[dria_uesugi]

Finally ^^;

Title: Nile Blue 29/33 (yes I do know how much there is left!)
Rating: PG13
Previous Parts: Chapter Twenty eight. Chapter One to Twenty eight.
Summary: Tuti and Nagayan are interviewed by Nagayan's high school sweetheart. Surely nothing can go wrong... can it?
Author's Notes: Its been forever since the last chapter, I'm very sorry and

Comments

[innusiq]

You don't know how excited I was to see this posted today! And then I noted how many more parts there are remaining, and then I read this part and my heart pretty much broke for Tuti... though I did want him to wise up a bit, but don't we all have those moments of tunnel vision where we can't see outside of the negative?

I also find it fascinating how two people can be so in tune with each other like Takashi and Tuti and yet, in situations like this, can be oblivious to the turmoil going through the other's head.

Poor Tuti, and Takashi, but I have faith all will work out.

[crazy_squirtle]

okies what did I tell you earlier...

well y'know, knowing what's going to happen next and how things will end gives me a huge advantage in reading this, but it doesn't spoil it one bit!

I love how you manage to make Tuti's irritation both completely understandable and completely irrational! It's one of those situations where neither one of them is in the wrong, or both of them are, which makes it that much more real rather than if Tuti had just been a bitch for no reason. ^__^

and the counting thing was great. I really liked the imagery of that XD

[butterfly_eli]

GAH! Tuti's gotta be all PMSsy and jealous. Which is cute if uncalled-for. And yes, you *better* start drafting #30. Like yesterday. ;) Though I do like the fact that the reporter has "girly habits" that bother Tuti. Probably because he can't do them himself (see: hairflick)

(and love the link back to 28, it made it so much easier for me to skim the old one prior to reading this one!)

[crazy_squirtle]

curse you. I can't stop staring at that DAMN ICON!!!

[butterfly_eli]

Who, me?

*caramelldansendancin'*

[hibimaosuki]

Ooooh! I was waiting for this confrontation so much! ^____________^

*... has a thing for fighting couples*

It's great. Like, these are two people who supposedly know a fair bit about each other and then we get all this internal conflict on Tuti's side. I hope you'll be writing out Nagayan's side on this, too~ ^_^

[zika_desu]

Yay! Seeing this posted made my day.

Jealous Tuti is pretty adorable I think but I do feel really bad for him.

They're both kinda at fault over it all and it'll be interesting to see how they handle this and see if their relationship has matured or not.

Can't wait till the next chapter!