I'm trying not to think about how long ago the last chapter was, however I swear on my *pnish* DVD collection that the next chapter will be written faster. Considering how this chapter ends, you're all going to be very grateful... ^_^;;
Title: Nile Blue chapter 28!
Rating: PG
Summary: This is another bitty chapter that serves mainly to move things
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I'm so happy, happy, haaaaappy for the update! ^_^ I have this love/hate relationship with that underlying tension that you can just feel building underneath every scene... and toss in a childhood sweetheart, and it's got me on pins and needles, wondering when everything's just going to explode!
Brava! "Standing O" from the peanut gallery!
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As for when things will explode.. it'll be the chapter after the next one...
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I love how you've made me feel the rush of everything leading up to this performance. The boys barely have a chance to slow down. Poor guys!
"Tuti rose up off the couch he’d been sitting on, the movement fluid and easy as he maintained his hold on Takashi’s wrist. Only once he was on his feet, with Takashi looking up at him half wary, half hopeful, did he answer with careful measured words. ‘Let me prove it to you.’"
It was only in the performance:( You tease ;P
An old sweetheart! This will definitely add some drama to the mix. I can't wait to see how the story evolves from here. *Awaits next chapter!*
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I have to admit, I've enjoyed inserting snippets of the play into the story. It probably is cheeky of me because I don't think I'd ever have the time to write the whole thing but... who knows, right?
Glad you enjoyed it ^_^
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Nagayan! What have you done! Ack!
Ok, you CAN NOT keep me waiting for the next chapter after THAT! AHHHH! (ToT).
But seriously, I LOVE it! It was a great way to end off a not-so-great Hump Day. I'm happy now...even if I'm left dangling off the dangerous edge of a cliff...(^_~)
Now, bring on the next chapter! *claps*
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Incidentally, it really amuses me that you call Wednesday's Hump Day too, the only other person I've heard call it that is one of the guy's at work...[/random thought of the day]
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Ah yes, first we were exposed to a jealous Takashi, it is only fitting that we should get to see a jealous Tuti. But the question is, will Tuti's own opinions of himself force him to just give up, or will he fight for his man. *shakes head a Tuti* Why do I sense the first choice? Especially with all this uncertainty going through the guy's head with the show itself, it's eventual end, and the possibility of losing Takashi... Why does this make me love the guy even more?
Thank you, thank you, thank you for continuing this! I can't wait for the next installment!!!!!
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Because its TUTI! You just can't help yourself ^_~ Neither can I though which is why I don't mind that this fic has eaten the last... one and three quarter years of my life ^^;
*tries to push RL out of the way to enable more fic writing*
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OH POOR TUTI. XD
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