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dri_br

Breathing Through Silent Blocks 4b

Jan 13, 2011 12:37

Title: Breathing Through silent Blocks 4b
Author: Dri
Fandom: Glee
Pairing: Puck/Kurt, past Sam/Kurt
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1182
Genre: AU, Future Fic, mentions of past mpreg
Summary: Breathing through life.
Disclaimer: They are so not mine, but I get to keep Ben for myself!
Author’s note: Thank you again for your amazing support concerning this ( Read more... )

glee, mpreg, btsb, puckurt

Comments 16

lillian_raven January 13 2011, 16:26:44 UTC

Repost of my old post because the chapter is also amazing after a re-read. ^^

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*giggle* Poor Finn.

But also poor Mercedes. She isn't one of my favorites characters but I wish that she also find a person who loves her like Puck loves Kurt.

Love also the end scene. It's so... bittersweet and I love this little piece of Pucks history. I understand why he wants something from his dad and he is happy that Ben has such a thing. :)

Wonderful part 4b. ^_^

You are a doll! dri_br January 13 2011, 16:41:00 UTC

Thanks dear!:)

I almost cried when I saw I had deleted the whole post! I don't know if you've got my im, but since *you* are so amazing, here we go again :) Thank you!
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Sorry I messed up with my entry :( Here's my reply to your comment.

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Oh year, Finn is so innocent it's almost ridiculous :) But I like him when he's not being a dork. As for Mercedes, I think I have to agree with you; she hasn't had a strong story line yet - almost everything that happens to her is related to Kurt. And kudos to the writers for making their friendship so beautiful :)

So you're a writer too, and not a native speaker? Those are two things we have in common - I'm from Brazil. Sometimes it's a struggle to find the right words to use, isn't it? I'd love to hear what it's like to you.

Oh, and I'll be reading your fics :)

Thanks again for taking your time to talk to me, dear!

Re: You are a doll! lillian_raven January 13 2011, 18:41:22 UTC

I totally understand that. I think I would react similar. So I am happy that I hadn't delete the e-mail with your response and with my original post ( ... )

Re: You are a doll! dri_br January 14 2011, 11:37:33 UTC

I feel the same way about Finn, even though the same thing that makes me love him, makes me hate him when he's being so naive he becomes the worst kind of selfish, if that makes any sense.

When *I* want to punch him hard, I cook :)

My mother tongue is Portuguese and I teach English. I actually started writing ffic to practice my English - and because I had a story to tell :) Thank God for patient, loyal betas - without them I wouldn't have come this far.

And I don't write fanfiction in Portuguese, our grammar is so complex, but I do write other stuff. My head buzzes with ideas, so I just have to find the time to organize them. I hope to be able to do it this year.

And as I told you, I'll be reading your stories! Let me just finish this baby here first so I won't get distracted :)

Nice talking to you, dear. Take care!

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psyko_kittie January 13 2011, 21:45:19 UTC

Sweet and funny. I just love Finn when he goes spastic over TMI details!! :D

Thanks! dri_br January 14 2011, 11:05:32 UTC

Hi there -

I'm glad Finn worked as a comic relief - the guy is funny, eve when he'd not supposed to be :)

Thanks again for sticking to this fic!

shamelessbrie January 14 2011, 04:19:09 UTC

This was great! Another wonderful chapter my dear! Finn and Mercedes very different reactions to Noah very thoroughly fucking Kurt all night long were totally adorable! I just love it! Especially with Finn being all spazstic (in a funny way) and Noah being smug! I especially loved the end when Noah fingered the space where Kurt's wedding ring used to be. Can't wait for 4c!!

Please tell me there's a part 5 and that 4c isn't the total end! *le sob* I love this story too much for it to end completely!

Thanks! dri_br January 14 2011, 11:21:21 UTC

Hi hon -

That's why I needed Finn in this story; I needed something (or someone) to be a buffer to all this angst - not that I'm all that good at angst, but this story is too bittersweet. Mercedes will poke Kurt, adn we'll finally get to know what's really going on in his head. Glad you're here and enjoying the fic.

Sorry, dear, but next chapter (5) will really be the end of it :( It's a one shot that got too long, and if I keep adding things, I will lose my focus. On the other hand, I plan to write Noah's story in this verse, starting with Sam's funeral and moving from there. I'll finish my Morgan/Reid fic and then we will see when I will start posting. The problem is that I'm such a slow writer, adn I won't be on vacation by then. Lets see how it goes.

Thanks again for your support, dear. Means a lot to me :)

PS: think I've never told you how distracting your icon is :)

haven_hell January 15 2011, 08:15:31 UTC

I'm glad Finn is such a good brother to Kurt. And Mercedes really lift up the whole scene <3 But my favorite moment is the last scene between Noah and Kurt. I don't know why, but this scene made me realize just how much Noah and Kurt have grown up from their Glee club days.

THIS:
"Noah didn’t move, instead he griped Kurt’s fingers and brought their joined hands to his eye level. Noah fluttered calloused fingertips to the strip on Kurt’s finger where his wedding ring would be if they hadn’t buried Sam with it."

AND THIS:
"Kurt thumbed Noah’s face, mapping with his fingers all the lines and scars that made Noah real and perfect, and smiled. "

Subtle yet meaningful <3

Thanks! dri_br January 17 2011, 07:44:01 UTC

Hi there -

After his speech in Furt, I started believeing that Finn could make some good brother material; I hope he doesn't disappoint us because I like him and his naivete (trying to be polite here) We'll get to see the other ide of the Kurt/Cedes dynamics in the next chapter, the real reason why I love these two :)

Asa for the last scene between Kurt and Puck, I tried to picture them ten years from high shcool (that's when this story takes place) and that's what i got. Again, i'm glad to know that so far it has worked for you.

Hope to see you back here for the last chapter, dear :)

Thanks again and take care :)

yaoi_ezi January 30 2011, 03:48:27 UTC

I love traumatized Finn :D it's such fun when he does his best to ignore/forget certain images lol.

Only one more chapter? aww...

Thanks! dri_br January 30 2011, 13:43:26 UTC

Finn was my stress relief in this fic. I had a great time writing him, and I hope he stayed in character :)

Dear, this just one more chapter got sooooo long :D Still, I hop eyou enjoy it!

Thanks for taking your time to talk to me!