Comments | drewandian: Can't Fight This Feelin' Pt 2

drewandian

Can't Fight This Feelin' Pt 2

Oct 29, 2009 00:57

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“Crap! Elizabeth? Crap! Hey, wake up!” John nudged Elizabeth gently, moving to drop a few light kisses on her cheek and temple. “Hey, as nice as this is…and it’s REALLY nice…we need to move or we’re gonna be doin’ a walk of shame into a meeting with the IOA!” Elizabeth moaned softly and snuggled closer to John, her eyes flying open ( Read more... )

sga, sparky, fan fic

Comments 11

ugahill October 29 2009, 13:35:35 UTC

oooo...very steamy and good so far! Can't wait for more!!

drewandian October 29 2009, 13:39:22 UTC

Thank you!

There will be more...as soon as I figure out a bunch of ways for them to torment the crap outta each other! :P (I'm a little worried that I've set myself up for an epic fail here.... :S)

bria67 October 29 2009, 18:33:24 UTC

OMG, I loved this story and the lighthearted, playful tone you wrote it in. Now I have the urge to snuggle on the couch with a cup of hot cocoa and read it again, LOL.
I like the way you wrote the characters, that's exactly how I see them in the first 3 seasons of SGA.
It's one of the most beautifully written romantic story I've ever had the pleasure of reading. It warmed up my soul on a cold autumn evening. Thank you!

drewandian October 29 2009, 18:38:12 UTC

Wow! Thank you so much!

It kinda took on a life of its own and there are parts in there that kinda surprised me as I wrote them (Elizabeth seemed to have different ideas than I did for the direction of the story).

I'm glad you enjoyed it and there will be more to come....lots of fun and yummy teasing! :)

starry_night October 30 2009, 03:10:51 UTC

And I read this one too...see I was on a roll ;)Love it! I love the tone, the characterisations, the dialogue, everything. Nicely done!

drewandian October 30 2009, 03:14:07 UTC

*blushes* thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it...

there will be more...I mean, they have a bet to settle still.... :P

krisrussel November 25 2009, 09:35:34 UTC

This is turning into one of my favs :^)
Can't wait for more!

drewandian November 25 2009, 13:21:25 UTC

Hee! Thanks! :)

There is more...it's on temporary hold while I write angsty-ish Christmas stuff...I should be back to this one soon though! :)

Thanks for reading!

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drewandian December 2 2009, 19:22:01 UTC

*blush* aw shucks, thanks! :P

I love writing the UST...and I'm working on getting better at the RST stuff too. This is one of my WIP that had to take a break for all the Christmas stuff...there will be plenty more though!

btw I love your icon! LOL

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drewandian December 2 2009, 22:54:25 UTC

:D consider it snurched! :P