The Changing Within

Jun 07, 2010 16:47

 written for sga_lfws

The Changing Within:

The Changing Within )

sga fan fic

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southernred2 June 8 2010, 01:15:37 UTC
Very insightful. You've got a good handle on John's feelings. He's lucky to have such a great family.

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krisrussel June 8 2010, 07:35:26 UTC
Great job and great insight into John's feelings.

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ugahill June 8 2010, 13:39:48 UTC
Nice. I really liked how you progressed down and then back again as John sunk into the mutation. Awesome!

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