Ready for the Fight

Apr 08, 2010 15:45

written for sga_lfws ; the prompt was : Write a fic in first person using an inanimate object as POV. Must feature at least one member from the team but it can also have anyone else. The fic must start with "I am"

We are Teyla Emmagan’s Bantos Sticks.

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drewandian April 9 2010, 03:37:58 UTC
Thank you! I loved being more descriptive and hope I can translate that aspect of my writing to other fics...it's something I've been trying to incorporate into everything I write now that i'm done being stupid about words lol.

I still think it's crazy that we essentially had the same idea for a fic, btw. Great minds and all that... :P

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bria67 April 11 2010, 19:33:34 UTC
I've read it last week on the LFWS site and I loved it. I wouldn't have guessed that you're the author because the main characters were Teyla and John. The description of the fight scene was very well done, I could visualize it easily.
Nice work! :):)

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drewandian April 11 2010, 19:45:22 UTC
I know that I usually stick to sparky fics, which is exactly why I signed up for the LFWS tourney. I wanted to stretch my writing muscles and develop some of the other characters. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Thanks for reading! :)

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