Stuck, pt 2

Dec 06, 2009 21:36

Elizabeth took a deep breath to calm herself and walked back over to John.

“Did you find anything?” John asked hopefully.

“No...Sorry…but I want to take a closer look at the chair. I might have missed something earlier.” she answered.
Stuck pt 2 )

sga, sparky, smut, fanfic

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sangate December 8 2009, 07:10:17 UTC
Had to leave quickly yesterday, but: *fans self* WOW *fans self some more* Nice :D

Very well written too btw :) Keep it up :D

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drewandian December 8 2009, 14:21:28 UTC
:) Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! (thanks for 'suffering' through the Sparky-ness lol :D)

(and I have to giggle at the "Keep it up" comment! :P lol)

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sangate December 8 2009, 14:30:42 UTC
ROFL I can assure you, had I replied immediately after reading, that word slip would not have occured :P ;)

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drewandian December 8 2009, 14:34:36 UTC
LOL uh huh, sure! :P

btw, did you get my PM?

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bria67 December 8 2009, 17:53:20 UTC
I liked that Teyla was telling Elizabeth about what happened without betraying John's trust.
How naughty of Elizabeth to miss the button that would open the restraints on the chair. *grins*

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drewandian December 8 2009, 18:30:23 UTC
Yeah...I like to think that Teyla, more than anyone else, would look out for both of them like that...
That was a last minute stroke of genius, if you ask me. NOT how I had planned to end the fic, but it just happened...I literally LOL'd while I was writing it! :P

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torri012 December 9 2009, 20:45:42 UTC
omg! was that just elizabeth 'raping' john? :P
oh my flipping ... I LOVE IT!!!
a bit sudden how all this happens but i'm NOT complaining! *still drooling*

:D

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drewandian December 9 2009, 22:25:08 UTC
yikes! I never thought of it that way! oh no!

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

and yeah, kinda sudden...but once Elizabeth's made her mind up about something, there's no stopping her!

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cutting_onions August 22 2010, 15:02:27 UTC
Naughty 'Lizabeth is naughty. I love it!!♥

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