For beachkid: Afterlife, Part 2

[gehayi]

Title: Afterlife (Part 1 is here.)
Fandom: TV (with two book characters)
Characters: Harry, Bob, Murphy, Kirmani, Michael Carpenter, Father Forthill, Morgan, Ancient Mai, OC villain
Recipient: beachkid
Prompt: Harry is a ghost. [and not just in Grave Peril ;)]
Word Count: 11,936
Rating: PG
Summary: Harry Dresden is a ghost with several problems-a

Comments

[beachkid]

eeeeeeeee. <3<3<3 my glee, it is overflowing. \o/ a plotty plot, a ghostly harry, unexpected guest appearances, and a happy ending. <3 not to mention, holy long. you spoil me rotten, and i thank you, so very much. :D awesomepants. *firm nod*

[gehayi]

*smiles* Thanks! I'm very glad (and very relieved!) that you like it!

[meanthis]

wow
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I don't know what else to say. Your story pretty much left me speechless, it was so good. Harry's voice fits and so does the portrayal of the other characters. Loved Harry joking so he wouldn't break down.
The blend of TV and Bookverse you present works seamlessly and the explanation for bringing Bob back to life is very believable.

GREAT WORK!
Keep it up!

[taylor_serenil]

Your stories are always impressive, and this was no exception. I liked Mai basically getting goaded into doing something she didn't want to do because Morgan said it was impossible. And Harry would do his level best to defend his city, his friends, and the closest thing he has to family even dead. And of course, yeah!uncursed Bob and yeah!resurrected Harry. Going in memories.