(Fic) Lunar Mage Chapter 2

Aug 06, 2006 09:22

Whooyeah...

Next to noone's reading my fic. And I DON'T CARE! (this is a blatant beg for reviews. I am that pathetic.)

Heh. Life's been hectic, had ups and downs with Professors, one was really good, the other was really bad, and I'm seeing another next week.

And there are summer studentships coming up. Oh yay, time to make a CV.

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iruka, fanfic, naruto, lunar mage

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First review...your lj's got a stalker calamity_bebop August 6 2006, 00:39:33 UTC
...Ah they're treating Iruka like an object...like a piece of meat, and for some strange reason I like it, just shows how much of the boy's fate is completely out of his hands.

I'm divided on this fic, I adore Kakairu but I still want the Itairu too, such a rare pairing. Hmmm...I'm not sure what I want but I think I'll calm myself down with a little menage a trois fantasy, featuring an Iruka-chan sandwich.

Don't be discouraged by the lack of reviews, this may sound like a cheesy broken record but a lot more people probably read your story and are just too lazy to comment, I've done it too many times to count. Overall I hope this kinda long review cheers you up.

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Re: First review...your lj's got a stalker drelfina August 6 2006, 02:00:28 UTC
I adore Kakairu too... Only I meant for it to be KakaIru, and Itachi to be just a creepy... creep, but it just... didn't work out that way. Somehow, Itachi is slightly more sympathetic than Kakashi.

Slightly.

And I love the idea of an Iruka-chan sandwich! But look at the interaction between the two Team Leaders. They're like two... territorial tigers/dogs/wolves/fill in your favourite animal. I have a feeling that it'd be more... Iruka would have to choose.

If they even *bother* to let him choose. :D

Thank you for the kind words! I know what you mean, since I'm guilty of it myself. It's only that, in contrast to Iruka 1/2, Lunar Mage is garnering far less readers, apparently. Must be the AUness. ^_^

Thanks! Your long review helped brighten my somewhat lousy day.

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scribblesitm August 6 2006, 00:52:59 UTC
A second LJ stalker checking in ...

Yeah pieceofmeat!Iruka is very nice.

The strange mix between agressive and passive from him is very interesting, it feels like we need to have more of an understanding of this world to truly realize why he acts liek he does. Genma Iruka would be cute too ;) but yeah not Itachi and Iruka, the weasel doesn't deserve iruka.

I do like the mgic aspect and the description of the ward was very interesting. Almost clear enough to see what was happening, I like that.

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drelfina August 6 2006, 02:05:37 UTC
Thank you! ^_^

I love the idea of Iruka-sandwich. If I could *beat* this story into that, I'd love to write it...

Or read *anyone's* version of it. Iruka squashed/torn between two very strong-headed... partners? people is probably one of my dreams...

Aww... that's so mean to Itachi! :D Yeah, my first impression too. I was wondering whether I'd made him too nice. Glad to see that you think he ain't all that nice!

But wait till Kakashi shows a little more personality...

GenIru is... sadly only a hint. He's got someone else already. *weeps* But GenIru is so very cute too!

Hmm. Passive aggressive? On whose part? If you mean Iruka, it's coz I didn't want him to be a weak victim. But he is after all, only a teen (15 years old)and probably isn't supposed to be making these sort of life-changing decisions. And the Fire Group is far too happy to coerce him into doing it anyway.

Child protection is nowhere in sight, people.

Glad you liked the magic! *dances*

Thanks for your comment. Brightened up my day.

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iruka and who? anonymous August 6 2006, 04:14:35 UTC
yeah i think kakairu is better

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insane_no_baka August 6 2006, 04:28:51 UTC
This....this is rather interesting. I haven't read anything with this kind of plot so I can't wait to see how it goes. It's rather interesting to have the characters all scrambled around and all....quick question, is Naruto going to be in there? Or is he gonna be the little brother that Iruka just gained? Keep updating please!!!!!!!!!! Oh! And I vote for kakairu!!!! Pwease? *tries the puppydog eyes*

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drelfina August 7 2006, 02:03:35 UTC
And I was wondering whether anyone noticed about Naruto. :D Oh, he'll appear, but probably not soon. ^_^

Glad you liked this story!

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kakashifan887 August 6 2006, 05:16:32 UTC
i loev this fic, i wnat the kakairu *raises hand*, i like kakashi being protective somewhat. i also love itachi clearly hitting on iruka >:D. but in the end i want kakairu XD*gives you muffins* please update again soon ^__^

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drelfina August 7 2006, 02:05:08 UTC
Wha... why is everyone wanting KakaIru? So little ItaIru love! :D

Well... it's a secret, how it's gonna end up, mostly because *I* don't know how it's gonna happen.

I wonder whether anyone is gonna change their minds in subsequent chapters? *grin*

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