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drelfina

Iruka 1/2 Chapter 4

Jun 22, 2006 09:47

I have no inclination to study. I have no inclination to write. I have inclination to do anything but sleep, which explains why this chapter is a little late.

Oh, This chapter is a little short - not quite the one I promised Be_be_waltz... >.< Sorry. That scene is in the next chapter. Totally forgot...

Ah well. Hope that you enjoy this one. ^_^

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iruka 1/2, iruka, fanfic, iruka1/2, naruto, kakairu

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kiasca June 21 2006, 22:23:09 UTC

xDDDD please more.

drelfina June 21 2006, 22:25:00 UTC

Heh. I'd love to, only exam tomorrow, and on Monday... So. Maybe... next week. >.<

drelfina June 21 2006, 22:26:11 UTC

BTW, I just *love* your art. Heart it so much... (tempted to ask for fanart for this fic...XD)

kiasca June 27 2006, 18:46:26 UTC

I'm not very proud of these two but hope you like them

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This needs warnings about being too funny scribblesitm June 21 2006, 22:30:32 UTC

Ahh man, in the midst of my hating all things computer, you come out with a new chapter, I lvoe this. It is hilarious. It keeps getting funnier!

I mean Iruka has Ibiki bent to his will and now Izumo aand Kotetsu have been taken out by doe eyes ... awesome

Thank You

Re: This needs warnings about being too funny drelfina June 21 2006, 22:33:02 UTC

Thank you. ^_^ Iruka can use his bambi eyes at *anyone*. Unfortunately, he is a little *too* young, and miscalculates... a bit too much and... he gets 'May I call you imouto-chan' and 'Ruru-chan'. poor Iruka.

Yeah right. ^_^

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drelfina June 22 2006, 04:37:28 UTC

Oh shit, I've killed Damian!

*tries revive no jutsu*

Heh. Do you like Ibiki's reaction to the shocking news that Iruka's a girl? Hehe... and I just love the boys' reaction... and Iruka's miscalculation. He/she over did it just a liiiittle bit. Now she's stuck with the nickname, two older brothers... and a lot of fun down the years. ^_^

Bambi eyes should come with a warning: May cause unexpected reactions in people if used in excess. Use sparingly and cautiously.

Iruka obviously didn't read the warning label.

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drelfina June 22 2006, 06:27:50 UTC

Wait until the next chapter... it would be vastly amusing from the readers' standpoint. Oh, and an OOC gets introduced. Not important, but a rather... *interested* observer. His thoughts are rather funny to me anyway. He just popped up, and demanded screen time...

And yeah well... Ibiki has a weakness for little girls (not in that way!!) and little kittens and the such. He always wanted a little daughter to cosset and spoil... see why he thinks girls don't have moodswings? And somehow, he doesn't see that Iruka has moodswings to beat the best of them, plus violent tendencies.

Not that I can blame him/her. It is a rather big disruption to one's life.

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mija711 June 22 2006, 06:06:09 UTC

omg Drelfina you made me almost spit my Icecream all over my sisters computer, that was totally hilarious!!! omg I loved it, iruka giving them THEE eyes of doom, hehe, and Ibiki all huggles and soothing and overprotective, "somebody is gonna pay" omg that was soo priceless and they want to protect thier new sister?? too cute I love that, but Ruru chan slamming Izumos head into the tree was just the perfect part to leave off on, great chapter I hope to read another one really soon, I sooo love this fic..ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)

drelfina June 22 2006, 06:14:50 UTC

OMG, what a reaction to this! ^_^ *am proud*

Yes, Iruka is such a little violent thing, isn't she? And Ibiki is just like a proud indulgent father, who can't see his little girl do anything wrong...

Pity Iruka overdid it, and now he's their imouto-chan... *snerk*

Ibiki is intensively protective of his little girl-student now. Of course someone is gonna pay for making his little girl cry! Heheh.

The fawn/doe/bambi eyes can do anything, short of physically defy gravity. See Iruka wield the POWER.

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drelfina June 22 2006, 16:06:56 UTC

I'm sure Kotetsu is comforted by the fact that his is not the only brain to melt by that... ^_^ Ruru-chan will make *everyone* pay once she gets hold of some hot water... only now KII see her as a helpless little girl.

She'll have some screaming to do now.

But screaming can't match up to the power of the bambi eyes. O.o

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drelfina June 22 2006, 19:13:51 UTC

But *isn't* She? She can't use ninjutsu in girl form, she *can't* control the changes... Oh, she's *definitely* a poor little helpless *girl!!*

Heh. If you choke and die, you won't be able to read the next chapter... Which should be up early next week, since I;m going away for a day trip.

So... Bambi eyes are his/her most powerful weapon... Watch her demolish opponents as strong as Ibiki and Sandaime! She rules!!!