Ficlet: Late Night Shift

Feb 28, 2008 22:59

A ficlet for Nezu, because she wanted one. And I hope I did it justice. <3

Late Night Shift )

fallen leaves, otherside fic, one-shot, naruto

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itcomesinphases February 28 2008, 18:49:32 UTC
The atmosphere here is delicious.

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nezumiko February 28 2008, 23:41:30 UTC
wow.Wow! you really did a great job with this! I love the atmosphere here. And the idea of Ginta being still is killer. I'm completely stealing that from you. Thank you so much for this!

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drelfina February 29 2008, 07:19:43 UTC
*has idea stolen! :O*

The idea that Ginta being still was very interesting because of the direct contradiction of him being hyperactive and completely being unable to sit still. ... well, he CAN, it's just that it takes great effort not to move, isn't it? For a mission, whatever.

And what can show anger/danger/lethality more than a very very fast, vicious predator going entirely still? Cats about to spring go tense, still and taut, and then they POUNCE.

Much as Ginta reminds me of a fluffy kitten most times, I still have to remember that the guy's a killing machine with claws.

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kilerkki March 1 2008, 03:53:47 UTC
I'm stealing Form 43-A, please. ♥

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drelfina March 1 2008, 05:48:32 UTC
Form 43-A started out as "Mission accomplished, personnel lost," but it was too drastic.

But I bet there are such forms out there. :P

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realnobiki March 2 2008, 09:45:03 UTC
i was hyperventilating along with ayame there. scary bleeding silent ANBU, BLEEDING on my desk, gonna die now... shit. this is why i make my anbu such comedic cracktastrophes, i can't handle the stress.

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drelfina March 2 2008, 09:46:47 UTC
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Yes, it's stressful. WHy does no one think that the desk-chuunin/ninja actually do work? They DO. THey get stressed and bled on and scared half to death and they have contempt to boot.

The behaviours from ninja appall me.

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