Fanfic Update! Pace Line: Two (Whip It, Babe Ruthless/Iron Maven)

[dreiser]

TITLE: Pace Line
SERIES: Whip It
AUTHOR: Dreiser
EMAIL: dreiser7@yahoo.com
YAHOO ID: dreiser7
MY WEBSITE: http://www.dreiser.org/
CONTENT: F/F romance. F/F sex. Babe Ruthless/Iron Maven. Sequel to Versus.SUMMARY: Babe Ruthless and Iron Maven's relationship was all about the pacing

Comments

[orange_creative]

Awesome! I love how you wrote everyone's character (and the fact that everything and everyone were really in character too). And it was hot, phew! But this fic totes reminds me of how my roommate and I got crazy with our pointy fingers at the end of Whip It!, hysterically screaming, "DID YOU SEE THAT?! THEY'RE SO GAY FOR EACH OTHER."

[torak303]

Wow! Not only was this unexpectedly and awesomely long, it was also brilliant. Not too long at all, I just wanted it to keep going. And it did! And it was awesome!

I really loved this. It's been a while since I saw the movie, and I'm not usually one for big age gaps, but this worked so well and you wrote the characters spot on. Great work!

[malexfaith]

This fic is just amazing. Its so mesmerising and addictive. I love how you get into each of their minds, and explained everything perfectly. Definitely something Im going to re-read heaps. And thanks to you Im now a fully devoted fan of this fandom. Cant wait to see waht else you come up with. Thanks heaps for sharing

[tristianmakhai]

Once again, you had me continually snickering, busting out laughing, and chortling with glee unashamedly over this. My brother probably thinks me half mad, but eh. This seriously (heh) tickled me to no end, and simply reaffirms the knowledge I need to get a hold of this damn movie!

If you write more, count me in to read!

[carinjo]

what a wonderful story to kick-start a new fandom for me. thanx!

ps. of course now i have just got to go see the movie.